The Disturbed Rose

Within your windows
Clouds are gathering moments
Of wild sound and light
My disturbed rose is afraid
Of the intense time of dance
Of the heat and light
In a rosy vacuum 
Leading to fountain
Poems again and again
Roads are desolate
My rose is afraid
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21/10/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ra Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 11:19 PM
Expressed beautifully, amazing poem
Gupta Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 1:47 AM
Thank you ...
Turner Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 1:01 PM
With good reason too, Probir. Such a nasty place, this world. Love the write, my friend!
Gupta Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 12:59 AM
Thank you ...
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October 21, 2016 at 12:21 PM
Delicate and gorgeously written, Probir. I really liked ... leading to fountain poems again and again. I am always refreshed after reading your poems. You write very beautifully. You express your poetic soul very well. Lovely poem. Stay blessed, my dear friend. Much love and more love to you.
Gupta Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 1:00 AM
Thank you ...
Balandi Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 10:07 AM
lovely poem. thanks for your lovely comments on my poem The Islandersx
Gupta Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 1:02 AM
Thank you ... Islanders deserved the comment ...
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October 21, 2016 at 7:22 AM
Worrisome rose wrapped in poetic splendor! Excellent my friend, Probir! A seven!
Gupta Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 7:28 AM
Thank you ...
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