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The Disturbed Rose

Within your windows Clouds are gathering moments Of wild sound and light My disturbed rose is afraid Of the intense time of dance Of the heat and light In a rosy vacuum Leading to fountain Poems again and again Roads are desolate My rose is afraid ____________________ 21/10/2016

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Sofia Ra

Date: 10/22/2016 11:19:00 PM

Expressed beautifully, amazing poem

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/23/2016 1:47:00 AM

Thank you ...

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/21/2016 1:01:00 PM

With good reason too, Probir. Such a nasty place, this world. Love the write, my friend!

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/22/2016 12:59:00 AM

Thank you ...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/21/2016 12:21:00 PM

Delicate and gorgeously written, Probir. I really liked ... leading to fountain poems again and again. I am always refreshed after reading your poems. You write very beautifully. You express your poetic soul very well. Lovely poem. Stay blessed, my dear friend. Much love and more love to you.

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/22/2016 1:00:00 AM

Thank you ...

Yasemin Balandi

Date: 10/21/2016 10:07:00 AM

lovely poem. thanks for your lovely comments on my poem The Islandersx

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/22/2016 1:02:00 AM

Thank you ... Islanders deserved the comment ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/21/2016 7:22:00 AM

Worrisome rose wrapped in poetic splendor! Excellent my friend, Probir! A seven!

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/21/2016 7:28:00 AM

Thank you ...