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The Distinction of Exinction

what despair is this
                                            civilization after
                                               society after
                                               culture after
                                                 individual
                                                    after
                                                    every
                                                     fate
                                                  suffered
                                                 to witness
                                              the fatheaded
                                            diseased minded
                                         ending of everything






08.08.2018

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Kale Brereton Date: 12/30/2018 11:38:00 AM I really really enjoyed this! thank you! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/31/2018 8:56:00 AM Thank You Kale! :) xomo

Lewis Raynes Date: 9/13/2018 1:49:00 PM Wow, I love this one, everything about it, a fav Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 9/13/2018 10:27:00 PM Thank you Lewis! I'm delighted you love it :)) xomo

Caren Krutsinger Date: 8/12/2018 10:03:00 PM You chose exactly the right shape for this one! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/16/2018 10:38:00 PM It just sorta happened :) thank you! xomo

Gabrielle Jordan Date: 8/11/2018 5:10:00 AM Mauteen, immediately made me sad, then angry, then sad again. Necessary, and very well written! Thank you! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/11/2018 7:33:00 AM That's exactly how I feel ;) thank You Gabrielle! xomo

Lawrence Sharp Date: 8/9/2018 11:38:00 PM Very well worded, and the hourglass perfectly illustrates time marching on our self-destruction. A very fine write. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/10/2018 7:19:00 AM Thank you Lawrence, one of those 'practically wrote itself' pieces, xomo!

Anisha Dutta Date: 8/9/2018 1:58:00 PM So right you are and so right is the shape. Don't know when and how can we get perfect progress. Love always. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/9/2018 7:57:00 PM We're too smart to function I always say. ;) Thank you lovely xomo!

Gershon Wolf Date: 8/9/2018 11:18:00 AM ...and I thought I was dark ... Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/9/2018 11:43:00 AM Giggles. Our bright personalities do have their shadows. <3

John Lawless Date: 8/9/2018 6:23:00 AM Let's hope it is not "our" glass that you speak of......nicely done Maureen.. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/9/2018 6:59:00 AM Mine has always been half full, but I appear to have sprung a leak... nope, that's just a tear of despair. ;) Thank you John, xomo

Anil Deo Date: 8/8/2018 5:33:00 PM Brilliant hourglass poem; we have opportunities, yet. But time is of the essence. Sorry I am tardy in ready Maureen; glad I caught this one. Yiu're such an honest, authentic, kind, inspiring & encouraging writer here on PS. Shalom, shalom. Anil (Changed your Icon/Image) Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/9/2018 6:56:00 AM Thank you so much Anil! I believe in opportunity, technology, if we muster the will, alas, unfortunately more like if industry muster's the will. Cause and effect~supply and demand, demand we should. I'm rambling... ;) thank you for your kind words, appreciated my friend. xomo

Jan Allison Date: 8/8/2018 4:17:00 PM love the hourglass shape, sadly the sands of time are running out for society:-( hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/8/2018 4:27:00 PM Thank you Jan! Weirdly enough it wasn't intentional, it was asking for it ;) xomo!

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/8/2018 12:09:00 PM Impressive shape with equally impressive message dearest, Maureen! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/8/2018 4:00:00 PM Thank you Sweet D <3 xomo!

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 8/8/2018 11:14:00 AM True and powerful words. And time trickles through the timer... Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/8/2018 4:00:00 PM Thank you! I've since recatagorized as shape, the shape presented itself, my muse has had her way with me ;)

Rd Mcmanes Date: 8/8/2018 9:16:00 AM enjoyed the poem and also love the hourglass visual. Nicely done. RD Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/8/2018 9:24:00 AM Thank you RD :) It presented itself, so I went with it, it's symbolism fitting. Almost switched a line for shape's sake ;) I toyed with turning it into a PacMan shape, lol! xomo

Sand Blown Date: 8/8/2018 7:57:00 AM so...trillionaires are funding the move to mars...go figure Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/8/2018 8:10:00 AM "They" are on Mars watching us with morbid fascination, the trillionaires, well, affording the last seats in the house to witness the grand finale. ;)