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The Disposable Age, For the Aged

The silence of the morning work bells contrasts the roar of modified Black Marias to the old and infirm perilously weakened by the virus it was the sound of the start of the beginning of the end.

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Date: 4/19/2020 6:55:00 PM
You got the length of this one perfect which is not easy. The sign of a good poet to me. My poetry improved when I adjusted length to suit the subject and message. As to content we are fortunate to have some tough old buggers still left in this part of world who are not easily knocked off their perch. Best regards David in NZ
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Vince Gullaci
Date: 4/22/2020 8:26:00 PM
To the land of the long white cloud, from the Sunburnt Country, a big thank you David for a wonderful comment. Sorry I'm late with my reply, Best Wishes, Vince.

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