The Display By Birds

The display by Birds(Limerick alliteration)

Heron helps the hen to hew a house dock,
This propels parrot to peak the peacock,
which fights fowl to the marrow,
Thrush sings songs of the sparrows,
Delightful to my dear deluded duck.



*dedicated to all creative writers all over the world esp p.soup poets*
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 7:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "any old butterfly poem" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
October 15, 2011 at 11:43 PM
Congratulations on your win olusequn. Nicely written
A   Avatar
October 15, 2011 at 8:24 PM
O.A., CONGRATULATIONS~ and thank you for the support in my butterfly contest,..p.d.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 15, 2011 at 8:00 PM
Congrats Olusegun on your wonderful win with these lovely butterfly lines luv..
A   Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 8:50 AM
O.A., ( again ) * here is another contest I did not congratulate..., stopping by AGAIN to give warm congratulations on my old contest. Sorry, I forgot to leave you a thank you *comment* of appreciation~ I hope you don't mind my copy paste congratulations.. Don't worry I have read this many times. lol. or how else would have I closed it with out reading. Can you accept my apology and old congrats on your poem. .p.d. the late bloomer
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 3:10 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Your (OWN) Favorite Poem" Olusegun. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 7:02 PM
Congrats Olusegun on 6th place win with this awesome poetry luv.. superbly penned..
Mehta Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 12:42 PM
Congratultions on the win in the contest of P.D., Olu
Quigley Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 12:04 PM
Congratulations on your win olusegun
Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 12:59 AM
I enjoyed your alliteration, Olusegun. And that deluded duck line was so cute.
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September 18, 2011 at 6:57 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..Very creative indeed..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and leaving an uplifting comment..Sara
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