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The Display By Birds

The display by Birds(Limerick alliteration) Heron helps the hen to hew a house dock, This propels parrot to peak the peacock, which fights fowl to the marrow, Thrush sings songs of the sparrows, Delightful to my dear deluded duck. *dedicated to all creative writers all over the world esp p.soup poets*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/21/2011 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "any old butterfly poem" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2011 11:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win olusequn. Nicely written
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Date: 10/15/2011 8:24:00 PM
O.A., CONGRATULATIONS~ and thank you for the support in my butterfly contest,..p.d.
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Date: 10/15/2011 8:00:00 PM
Congrats Olusegun on your wonderful win with these lovely butterfly lines luv..
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Date: 9/28/2011 8:50:00 AM
O.A., ( again ) * here is another contest I did not congratulate..., stopping by AGAIN to give warm congratulations on my old contest. Sorry, I forgot to leave you a thank you *comment* of appreciation~ I hope you don't mind my copy paste congratulations.. Don't worry I have read this many times. lol. or how else would have I closed it with out reading. Can you accept my apology and old congrats on your poem. .p.d. the late bloomer
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Date: 9/21/2011 3:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Your (OWN) Favorite Poem" Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2011 7:02:00 PM
Congrats Olusegun on 6th place win with this awesome poetry luv.. superbly penned..
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Date: 9/20/2011 12:42:00 PM
Congratultions on the win in the contest of P.D., Olu
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Date: 9/20/2011 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win olusegun
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Date: 9/19/2011 12:59:00 AM
I enjoyed your alliteration, Olusegun. And that deluded duck line was so cute.
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Date: 9/18/2011 6:57:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..Very creative indeed..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and leaving an uplifting comment..Sara
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