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The Difference With Mist

the difference with mist this…. landscape of blurry fog mist that rise from breathless trees kiss with vapors from the mourning rain wish upon a lonely breeze place with sorrow your heavy dew encase thy eternal lips traced by charcoal and vellum erased with lightness that is missed A poetry contest sponsored by Rick Lento

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Date: 8/14/2011 1:02:00 PM
Some great lines in this one. I surely enjoyed. Congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 8/13/2011 1:35:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Rick, Earnesto
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Date: 8/13/2011 10:46:00 AM
Very nice, well done. Congratulations on your win. nice to see your name in the winner's circle. Lee
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Date: 8/13/2011 9:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest sponsored by ^Rick Parise "Lento Poetry" Ernest. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/13/2011 8:29:00 AM
hey Ernest, congrats on your win, David
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Date: 8/12/2011 11:45:00 PM
congrats ernest on your exciting win in Lento Poetry with these brilliant lines luv.. also Rick asked me to pass along his congrats to u as well..luv..
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Date: 8/12/2011 9:53:00 PM
Ernest, congratulations on your win.Enjoyed your poem.
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