The Difference With Mist

the difference with mist		


this…. landscape of blurry fog
mist that rise from breathless trees
kiss with vapors from the mourning rain
wish upon a lonely breeze

place with sorrow your heavy dew
encase thy eternal lips
traced by charcoal and vellum
erased with lightness that is missed

A poetry contest sponsored by Rick Lento
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Gorelick Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 1:02 PM
Some great lines in this one. I surely enjoyed. Congrats on your win. BG
Mehta Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 1:35 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Rick, Earnesto
Ramage Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 10:46 AM
Very nice, well done. Congratulations on your win. nice to see your name in the winner's circle. Lee
Brown Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 9:49 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest sponsored by ^Rick Parise "Lento Poetry" Ernest. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 8:29 AM
hey Ernest, congrats on your win, David
Sweetheart Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 11:45 PM
congrats ernest on your exciting win in Lento Poetry with these brilliant lines luv.. also Rick asked me to pass along his congrats to u as well..luv..
Poet Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 9:53 PM
Ernest, congratulations on your win.Enjoyed your poem.
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