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The Difference

What makes us different Is the nature in us, Your fragile heart, As tender as flower, Your standing chest Like ripe fruit from yonder. What makes us different is My heart of stone, Depicting manliness, My Adam apple and muscle, Bold and sure, Meaning certainty and rigidity. What makes us different Is your ideas, portraying your Flexibility, My ego and your ego, different Paths they go. What makes us different Is you and i, different like Fire and water.... I respect your motherly nature, It affects eternity, Your lips and hips shows us differently, You were created from me, Meaning without me, YOU ARE NOT COMPLETE.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/3/2010 11:34:00 AM
This is a wonderful write on what makes us different. well expressed. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 11/2/2010 4:54:00 PM
good work... very passionate yet philosophical.
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Date: 11/2/2010 1:50:00 PM
Nice thoughts you have expressed on what makes us different, charles
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Date: 11/2/2010 10:46:00 AM
Very beautiful,especially how it ends!Great work!Celene.
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