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The Difference

Vacant cache Arid well Hollow cave Silent knell Stony flesh Scentless smell Frozen heart Fractured shell That was before... Lively laugh Refreshing dew Treasured time Vibrant hue Awakened sense Brightened view Love's aroma Found anew This is a re-post © Donna Golden

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Mary Duhart

Date: 1/31/2009 8:31:00 PM

Great write and thank you for reviewing my work also. Continue to share

Brian Strand

Date: 1/31/2009 9:02:00 AM

Like the pace in this one Donna.Rgds Brian

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/30/2009 7:26:00 PM

Richly descriptive contrasts... excellent phrasing and images. Best wishes, Keith

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/30/2009 3:58:00 PM

Nice words Donna, love's inception refreshes us deeply...Raul

Donna Golden

Date: 1/30/2009 2:30:00 PM

This is dedicated to re-descovering a neglected relationship. Donna G.

Christy Hardy

Date: 1/30/2009 2:16:00 PM

I think I am reading you have found a new love, one that brings you so much happiness, am I right...if so, I am so happy for you, blessings, always, Christy