The Dew At Dawn

In the dew of dawn
Black thorns become pink rose leaves
Grey foes orange friends
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12/1/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Michaels Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 9:35 AM
Lovely imagery!
Gupta Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 11:28 AM
Thank you ...
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2017 at 2:06 PM
- Gorgeous image, Probir - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
January 13, 2017 at 8:11 PM
Thank you, Anne ... probir ...
Pasky Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 3:19 PM
I wish I could master the sparsity of words that you have. This is beautiful.
Gupta Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 8:47 PM
For me small is always beautiful ... Thank you ...
Roper Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 10:46 AM
Very good Haiku.. Probir, to draw a picture in 17 syllables is hard.. the subject, objective, ending or outcome..
Gupta Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 11:29 AM
Thanks, Eve ... Such detail was not there on my mind when keyboarding ... The thorns and leaves were really there ... the rest from thought ...
Tanwar Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 9:59 AM
wow you very good in writting sir
Gupta Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 11:30 AM
Your appreciation after a long time, Manu ... thanks ...
Trifiatis Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 3:06 AM
How delightful my friend, Probir!
Gupta Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 3:33 AM
Glad that you liked it ... thank you ...
Wolf Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 12:29 AM
Wonderful Haiku, Probir! /|\
Gupta Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 3:33 AM
Thank you ...
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