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The Dew At Dawn

In the dew of dawn Black thorns become pink rose leaves Grey foes orange friends ______________________________________________ 12/1/2017

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Date: 2/26/2017 9:35:00 AM

Lovely imagery!

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/26/2017 11:28:00 AM

Thank you ...

Date: 1/13/2017 2:06:00 PM

- Gorgeous image, Probir - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/13/2017 8:11:00 PM

Thank you, Anne ... probir ...

Date: 1/12/2017 3:19:00 PM

I wish I could master the sparsity of words that you have. This is beautiful.

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/12/2017 8:47:00 PM

For me small is always beautiful ... Thank you ...

Date: 1/12/2017 10:46:00 AM

Very good Haiku.. Probir, to draw a picture in 17 syllables is hard.. the subject, objective, ending or outcome..

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/12/2017 11:29:00 AM

Thanks, Eve ... Such detail was not there on my mind when keyboarding ... The thorns and leaves were really there ... the rest from thought ...

Date: 1/12/2017 9:59:00 AM

wow you very good in writting sir

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/12/2017 11:30:00 AM

Your appreciation after a long time, Manu ... thanks ...

Date: 1/12/2017 3:06:00 AM

How delightful my friend, Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/12/2017 3:33:00 AM

Glad that you liked it ... thank you ...

Date: 1/12/2017 12:29:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku, Probir! /|\

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/12/2017 3:33:00 AM

Thank you ...