The Devil's Motel

We are all suspended between heaven and hell Which way are we headed only time will tell If I were to guess Should be scantily dressed In case you're sweltering at the Devil's Motel © Jack Ellison 2015
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Eastman Avatar
October 6, 2015 at 11:13 AM
The Devil this month can't seem to wait... He's definitely been playing with my fate... Surgeries, puppies and a heavy cost to give them weight... But he can't hold me down at any rate... And I know on him this has to grate... /Sticking my tongue out at him... I'm too busy to fall to his whims...Tho he can make life very grim... With the Lord I'm filled to the very brim... And I won't give in...
Smith Avatar
October 5, 2015 at 3:24 PM
If you're waiting it's going to be long....for the grizzly ol' reaper ain't comin along...he's gonna be late...cause he's out on a date...so hike up your tutu we can all see your thong
Ellison Avatar
October 5, 2015 at 5:20 PM
LOL!!!! Everyone wants to be a comedian!!!
Konos Avatar
October 5, 2015 at 3:04 PM
Hey Jack I misunderstood your Limerick...I thought it was about two cheatin people hot and sweaty from making love....oh well...
Ellison Avatar
October 5, 2015 at 5:18 PM
What are you doing tonight????? Hugs and stuff, Jackson xxxxx
Konos Avatar
October 5, 2015 at 8:48 AM
I'm not going to comment on this in case the clerk remembers me...
Ellison Avatar
October 5, 2015 at 12:28 PM
See you down there... maybe we could room together next semester!!!
Tor Avatar
October 5, 2015 at 6:13 AM
Scary thought Great one. I hope I go in my undies. lol
Ellison Avatar
October 5, 2015 at 12:35 PM
I will too... but I'll put on lots of sunscreen!
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