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The Devil's Motel

We are all suspended between heaven and hell Which way are we headed only time will tell If I were to guess Should be scantily dressed In case you're sweltering at the Devil's Motel © Jack Ellison 2015

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Date: 10/6/2015 11:13:00 AM
The Devil this month can't seem to wait... He's definitely been playing with my fate... Surgeries, puppies and a heavy cost to give them weight... But he can't hold me down at any rate... And I know on him this has to grate... /Sticking my tongue out at him... I'm too busy to fall to his whims...Tho he can make life very grim... With the Lord I'm filled to the very brim... And I won't give in...
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Date: 10/5/2015 3:24:00 PM
If you're waiting it's going to be long....for the grizzly ol' reaper ain't comin along...he's gonna be late...cause he's out on a date...so hike up your tutu we can all see your thong
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/5/2015 5:20:00 PM
LOL!!!! Everyone wants to be a comedian!!!
Date: 10/5/2015 3:04:00 PM
Hey Jack I misunderstood your Limerick...I thought it was about two cheatin people hot and sweaty from making love....oh well...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/5/2015 5:18:00 PM
What are you doing tonight????? Hugs and stuff, Jackson xxxxx
Date: 10/5/2015 8:48:00 AM
I'm not going to comment on this in case the clerk remembers me...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/5/2015 12:28:00 PM
See you down there... maybe we could room together next semester!!!
Date: 10/5/2015 6:13:00 AM
Scary thought Great one. I hope I go in my undies. lol
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Date: 10/5/2015 12:35:00 PM
I will too... but I'll put on lots of sunscreen!