The Devil of a Deal

Where will tomorrow take us
Only God alone can tell
A brighter future a cloudless day
Or an earthly living Hell 
How much of its our doing
How much is down to me
Is the fate laid out before us
A future meant to be

I know I've tempted fate before
At least a time or two
Risked life and limb and maybe more
I'd risk it all anew
Cos life for me's a wonderland
A journey to behold
A beautiful utopia
For the young and for the old

Til man exacts his dominance
Over everything he can
And mortgages each single soul
Of every living man
A banking led dystopia
Indebtedness their aim
We're caught here in the crossfire
In a costly Rotschild game

The year is sixteen ninety four
And a deal is on the cards
The notes are shilling loudly
From the moneylenders bards
Twelve hundred thousand reasons
Mortgage woman, man and child
The deal's been done, the trap's been sprung
The laughing Joker's wild

The Devil dealt a crooked hand
The rules weren't Heaven sent
The loans they pays a kingly ransome
The bets at eight percent
Inflationary stirms prevail
Nations drowningbin the flood
The odds now stacked in favour
Of a deal they signed in blood

Now money's just a token
The game is truly up
Their sleight of hand's been deftly played
They fill their debtors cup
Human lives collateral
As the game stacks in their favour
No money's needed anymore
The game is theirs to savour

Where will tomorrow take us
Only God alone can tell
The Devil deals in dying folks
His deals a living Hell 
The game's a crooked one we know
It's plain for all to see
And the fate laid out before us 
Is down to you and me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 3/17/2024 3:23:00 PM
Damn this is good. You had me from start to finish. Bravo. I’m surprised this hasn’t received a number of comments. It’s deserving of praise.
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Peter Walsh
Date: 4/14/2024 6:08:00 AM
It tells the story of the banking systems inception in 1694 when a Scottish Lord William Patterson offered Bonny prince William 1 million 200,000 as a loan at 8% interest but would only grant the loan if he was allowed a charter to offer loans to the colonials at the same interest rate! And here we are . . .
Date: 3/21/2023 6:17:00 PM
Tomorrow is not promised. And yes, only God knows when one’s time is up. Good write, Peter.
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Date: 3/23/2023 8:51:00 AM
Thank you for the read Fin
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