1-1-19 Rhyme Time 7- Deep and Dark Contest Sponsor: Lu Loo
As a soul free falls into the celestial mist A distant star will dim its light Its luster vanishing into a black hole's grist, Yet dawn will inhale a cosmic breath To ease the darkness of the depth of death As the soul takes perpetual flight How deep the grief which brings the tears And heavy the heart laden with sorrow Yet the pain will surpass the years As the depths of despair take its toll Shattering what was once whole And scattering the pieces into the morrow
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