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THE DEPARTURE

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, PICTURE TAKEN BY ME, 01 OCTOBER 2016, (c)

The Departure

Liberated her soul left

Towards the heavens it rose

The sun and the moon both set

In darkness I pause!






(c) Demetrios Trifiatis
      01 October 2016


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Copyright © Demetrios Trifiatis | Year Posted 2016

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October 1, 2016 at 8:17 PM

freedom to be in heaven and waiting Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 2, 2016 at 10:17 AM

thank you dearest, Eve for your lovely visit!

Afolabi Muideen

October 1, 2016 at 4:44 PM

A very touching gem. Thanks for posting..........A.M.

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 1, 2016 at 6:24 PM

Thank you my friend, Afolabi!

Richard Lamoureux

October 1, 2016 at 8:57 AM

Sad and beautiful.

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 1, 2016 at 9:43 AM

So good to see you, Richard, my friend! thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 1, 2016 at 7:22 AM

- I believe It's all about the soul knowledge - not earthly knowledge ... - A great and deep poem, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 1, 2016 at 9:47 AM

Yes, it is my dearest. Thank you so very much for your dear visit my friend, Anne-Lise!

October 1, 2016 at 6:58 AM

Brilliant write. Very deep & sad. I like it.............//hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 1, 2016 at 9:46 AM

Manmath, so wonderful to receive your visit! Thank you!

October 1, 2016 at 5:06 AM

An oceanic molecule ... Beautiful indeed ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 1, 2016 at 6:44 AM

Appreciated!

October 1, 2016 at 6:14 AM

Oceanic it is ...Not just 'what else' ... An ocean in a molecule ... Essentially indeed so ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 1, 2016 at 5:13 AM

Thank you dear, Probir! What else could it be?

Bozhidar Pangelov

October 1, 2016 at 2:50 AM

Liberated her soul left !!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 1, 2016 at 4:38 AM

Bozhidar, my friend, how wonderful to see you again after such a long time! Hope all is alright! Thank you for visiting!

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