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THE DEPARTURE

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, PICTURE TAKEN BY ME, 01 OCTOBER 2016, (c)

Liberated her soul left Towards the heavens it rose The sun and the moon both set In darkness I pause! (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 01 October 2016 7-7-7-5

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/1/2016 8:17:00 PM

freedom to be in heaven and waiting Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/2/2016 10:17:00 AM

thank you dearest, Eve for your lovely visit!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 10/1/2016 4:44:00 PM

A very touching gem. Thanks for posting..........A.M.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/1/2016 6:24:00 PM

Thank you my friend, Afolabi!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/1/2016 8:57:00 AM

Sad and beautiful.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/1/2016 9:43:00 AM

So good to see you, Richard, my friend! thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/1/2016 7:22:00 AM

- I believe It's all about the soul knowledge - not earthly knowledge ... - A great and deep poem, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/1/2016 9:47:00 AM

Yes, it is my dearest. Thank you so very much for your dear visit my friend, Anne-Lise!

Manmath Dalei

Date: 10/1/2016 6:58:00 AM

Brilliant write. Very deep & sad. I like it.............//hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/1/2016 9:46:00 AM

Manmath, so wonderful to receive your visit! Thank you!

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/1/2016 5:06:00 AM

An oceanic molecule ... Beautiful indeed ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/1/2016 6:44:00 AM

Appreciated!

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/1/2016 6:14:00 AM

Oceanic it is ...Not just 'what else' ... An ocean in a molecule ... Essentially indeed so ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/1/2016 5:13:00 AM

Thank you dear, Probir! What else could it be?

Bozhidar Pangelov

Date: 10/1/2016 2:50:00 AM

Liberated her soul left !!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/1/2016 4:38:00 AM

Bozhidar, my friend, how wonderful to see you again after such a long time! Hope all is alright! Thank you for visiting!