The Dentist

the dentist 
discussing my treatment - - 
his bottom plate moves
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Devonshire Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 3:11 PM
I love the way you interjected some humor into a painful visit to the dentist, Charles. A friend of mine is headed to the dentist Friday. I'd like to share this with her if you don't mind. She needs major work done and this might give her a laugh. Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 11:05 PM
this is human nature AND comical, charles. So by your own different definitions you gave me in my comment box and at the blog, it could be either senryu OR haiku. I guess I am seeing you do differently here than what you are asking for in the contest (also, which is strictly 5/7/5)It's all very confusing for me. I want to do your contest correctly, but that kigo link totally overwhelms me and is discouraging me now from doing it. You can soupmail me to explain better. Luv, Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 10:19 PM
hahaha this one is funny to me. Once again, why don't you call this senryu?
Lane Avatar
October 26, 2011 at 3:35 PM
Yikes! Tony
Song Avatar
October 26, 2011 at 3:35 PM
Oh Lordie Lordie, Charles...talk about NOT practicing what one preaches !! I got it!!! haha. Gwendolen
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October 26, 2011 at 3:31 PM
Charles , funny , did you see this happen?? Well done ! Anne
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