The Demur of Lovers

the demur of lovers
hope is courage born. feelings of anguish may form. love excites the mind. passion forms to bind in time. faithfully, intimacy fulfills. _________________________| PENNED ON AUGUST 25, 2014!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 8/29/2014 1:35:00 AM
I like the flow of the words, very creative write. congrats. Verlena
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/29/2014 10:00:00 AM
Thanks Dr.Ram... Verlena
Date: 8/28/2014 6:32:00 PM
Hope is courage born...my favorite line, Verlena. Congrats.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/28/2014 7:02:00 PM
Thanks faye... Verlena
Date: 8/28/2014 4:49:00 PM
Verlena, Congratulations, on your winning Tanka, SKAT LOVE
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/28/2014 5:26:00 PM
Thanks Skat for the congratulations... Verlena
Date: 8/28/2014 3:35:00 PM
you are welcome
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Date: 8/28/2014 2:36:00 PM
You deserve this huge win, Verlena! Congratulations to you, my friend!Pandita
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/28/2014 3:31:00 PM
Thanks Pandita... Verlena
Date: 8/28/2014 2:25:00 PM
Hey Verlena, nice play on the subtle dance of intimacy.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/28/2014 3:31:00 PM
Thanks John... Verlena
Date: 8/28/2014 1:54:00 PM
Hi Verlena,, Congrats on your "Hope, Faith and Love Tanka win." Love Linda
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/28/2014 3:31:00 PM
Thanks PD... Verlena
Date: 8/28/2014 11:28:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Verlena:-) hugs Jan xx
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/28/2014 1:02:00 PM
Thanks for the congrats Jan. Verlena
Date: 8/25/2014 9:07:00 PM
very nice. good luck in the contest.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/25/2014 10:00:00 PM
Thanks Maurice... Verlena
Date: 8/25/2014 6:11:00 PM
Lovely Tanka with a great message of hope and love:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxxx
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/25/2014 6:12:00 PM
Thanks Jan for your supportive comments... Verlena
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