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The Demur of Lovers

the demur of lovers hope is courage born. feelings of anguish may form. love excites the mind. passion forms to bind in time. faithfully, intimacy fulfills. _________________________| PENNED ON AUGUST 25, 2014!

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/29/2014 1:35:00 AM

I like the flow of the words, very creative write. congrats. Verlena

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/29/2014 10:00:00 AM

Thanks Dr.Ram... Verlena

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/28/2014 6:32:00 PM

Hope is courage born...my favorite line, Verlena. Congrats.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/28/2014 7:02:00 PM

Thanks faye... Verlena

Skat A

Date: 8/28/2014 4:49:00 PM

Verlena, Congratulations, on your winning Tanka, SKAT LOVE

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/28/2014 5:26:00 PM

Thanks Skat for the congratulations... Verlena

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/28/2014 3:35:00 PM

you are welcome

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/28/2014 2:36:00 PM

You deserve this huge win, Verlena! Congratulations to you, my friend!Pandita

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/28/2014 3:31:00 PM

Thanks Pandita... Verlena

John Lawless

Date: 8/28/2014 2:25:00 PM

Hey Verlena, nice play on the subtle dance of intimacy.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/28/2014 3:31:00 PM

Thanks John... Verlena

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/28/2014 1:54:00 PM

Hi Verlena,, Congrats on your "Hope, Faith and Love Tanka win." Love Linda

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/28/2014 3:31:00 PM

Thanks PD... Verlena

Jan Allison

Date: 8/28/2014 11:28:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Verlena:-) hugs Jan xx

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/28/2014 1:02:00 PM

Thanks for the congrats Jan. Verlena

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/25/2014 9:07:00 PM

very nice. good luck in the contest.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/25/2014 10:00:00 PM

Thanks Maurice... Verlena

Jan Allison

Date: 8/25/2014 6:11:00 PM

Lovely Tanka with a great message of hope and love:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxxx

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/25/2014 6:12:00 PM

Thanks Jan for your supportive comments... Verlena