Verlena S. Walker Poet Tanka

The Demur of Lovers

the demur of lovers
hope is courage born.
feelings of anguish may form.
love excites the mind.
passion forms to bind in time. 
faithfully, intimacy fulfills.
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PENNED ON AUGUST 25, 2014!

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Dr.Ram Mehta August 29, 2014 at 1:35 AM I like the flow of the words, very creative write. congrats. Verlena Verlena S. Walker August 29, 2014 at 10:00 AM Thanks Dr.Ram... Verlena

Faye Gibson August 28, 2014 at 6:32 PM Hope is courage born...my favorite line, Verlena. Congrats. Verlena S. Walker August 28, 2014 at 7:02 PM Thanks faye... Verlena

Skat A August 28, 2014 at 4:49 PM Verlena, Congratulations, on your winning Tanka, SKAT LOVE Verlena S. Walker August 28, 2014 at 5:26 PM Thanks Skat for the congratulations... Verlena

Poet Destroyer A August 28, 2014 at 3:35 PM you are welcome

Pandita Sietesantos August 28, 2014 at 2:36 PM You deserve this huge win, Verlena! Congratulations to you, my friend!Pandita Verlena S. Walker August 28, 2014 at 3:31 PM Thanks Pandita... Verlena

John Lawless August 28, 2014 at 2:25 PM Hey Verlena, nice play on the subtle dance of intimacy. Verlena S. Walker August 28, 2014 at 3:31 PM Thanks John... Verlena

Poet Destroyer A August 28, 2014 at 1:54 PM Hi Verlena,, Congrats on your "Hope, Faith and Love Tanka win." Love Linda Verlena S. Walker August 28, 2014 at 3:31 PM Thanks PD... Verlena

Jan Allison August 28, 2014 at 11:28 AM Dropping back with my congrats Verlena:-) hugs Jan xx Verlena S. Walker August 28, 2014 at 1:02 PM Thanks for the congrats Jan. Verlena

Maurice Yvonne August 25, 2014 at 9:07 PM very nice. good luck in the contest. Verlena S. Walker August 25, 2014 at 10:00 PM Thanks Maurice... Verlena

Jan Allison August 25, 2014 at 6:11 PM Lovely Tanka with a great message of hope and love:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxxx Verlena S. Walker August 25, 2014 at 6:12 PM Thanks Jan for your supportive comments... Verlena