The Defete

The aroma of life has long been expired
Wispering sounds of slence can be heard everywhere
Darkness now seemd like a tunnel witout light
The vision of uncertainy has long been blinded
Doves now seem to know the long wait has ended
The wings no longer need to be repaired
For a moment's glance it seemed havoic, then tranquill
The window of pain have now surendered
As the beauty finally elapsed into its own cocoon
The rage of its turmoil has ended


        In memory of my father as he entered his final journey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Torres Avatar
November 17, 2008 at 2:49 AM
Bonnie write some more I miss your poetry. God bless you Micahel Torres
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November 12, 2008 at 1:35 PM
A painful, and heartfelt poem, Bonnie. Many of us can relate to those feelings. Sincere sympathy to you for your loss. Blessings...Carrie
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November 10, 2008 at 1:29 AM
Very touching Bonnie. Sorry for your heartfelt loss. Great poem in memory of him. Michael Torres
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