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The Deer Shake Off the Headlights

The deer shake off the headlights


We sat in the car outside the 
liquor store peering like deer, our eyes 
following Pinky as she went in to 
the store for a twelve pack of beer.
Our breathing stops. She's carded. Shucks.
Fake card works. Yes! Pinky time. She
sashays back, with beer and condoms, smiling.

connie pachecho

4/12/17 

Note-Kwansaba 7 sentences/lines containing 7 words in each?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/12/2017 2:01:00 PM
Been there, good job Connie...
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