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The Deer

By the brook I saw the deer on an autumn day very clear sensing there was someone near off she ran maybe out of fear. In the woods with her fawn, leaping off she showed no brawn. To her well known trails she leapt Leaving sounds as if leaves were being swept.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/17/2015 4:58:00 PM
I think "she rather off, maybe out of fear" flows better
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Date: 4/25/2015 6:48:00 PM
what charming imagery - I could picture the scene in my mind:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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