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The Deepest Sleep

The deepest sleep He had been sleeping deeply woke up tried to be awake before the sleep took him into the depth of death. He struggled to open his eyes, couldn`t. Knew he had to make it, was able to put one foot on the floor, the coldness of the floor made him open his eyes. He inhaled intensely it had been a close call had he slept five minutes more It had been too late.

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