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The Deepening Sky

I was thinking............. 
about you and I 
Shadows begin to fall 
Upon our bed 
Sun sinking 
Deepening sky 

I was thinking........... 
About you and I 
The warmth of you 
Sun sinking............ 
what I want to do 

The flash of the arrow 
Straight and true 
Hit me through................. 
Through my heart so 

Thinking,was I 
About you 
The deepening sky 
This arrow found it too 

With the night 
Comes loving too 
the warmth......... 
of you.......... 
This sky............ 
Covering......... 

My thought... 
Arrow caught 
Sun sinking........ 
Deepening sky.......... 
I was thinking............. 
About you and I 

My heart,the candle 
You... 
The light..... 
Burns too........ 
Through the night 

The sky at night 
Deepening candlelight 
Loving too................ 
Flash of arrow............. 
Caught me........... 
Caught you too

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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