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The Deepening Sky

I was thinking............. about you and I Shadows begin to fall Upon our bed Sun sinking Deepening sky I was thinking........... About you and I The warmth of you Sun sinking............ what I want to do The flash of the arrow Straight and true Hit me through................. Through my heart so Thinking,was I About you The deepening sky This arrow found it too With the night Comes loving too the warmth......... of you.......... This sky............ Covering......... My thought... Arrow caught Sun sinking........ Deepening sky.......... I was thinking............. About you and I My heart,the candle You... The light..... Burns too........ Through the night The sky at night Deepening candlelight Loving too................ Flash of arrow............. Caught me........... Caught you too

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