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The Deep Breath

The beautiful page The image With the bunch of the books Under the warm armpit The molecules Coming out through the nostrils Into the air What a charming delight In the pores of the body Where did the parks fly off I look for the wind That have perhaps blown them away Beyond redemption And those black board and chalks The windows red and pink The turquoise ink The blinking blue hazes of time A blurred paradigm We build to break No deep breath Whispers the breeze through the chime _______________________________________ April 20, 2018

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Date: 7/2/2018 12:10:00 PM
Hi PG.. Congrats on being a featured poet this week. This poem is certainly worthy of that recognition. Blessings! Come see me...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/3/2018 8:16:00 AM
Thank you, Lyric ... I am sorry I have been a little irregular at poetry soup of late ...
Date: 4/20/2018 6:55:00 AM
Great work Probir!
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Date: 4/20/2018 10:52:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 4/20/2018 5:13:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/20/2018 10:53:00 AM
Thank you, Sunshine ...
Date: 4/19/2018 11:20:00 PM
Your imagery is fabulous, Probir, enjoyed reading ... Hugs dear friend
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/20/2018 10:57:00 AM
Thank you, Eve

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