The Deep Breath

The beautiful page The image With the bunch of the books Under the warm armpit The molecules Coming out through the nostrils Into the air What a charming delight In the pores of the body Where did the parks fly off I look for the wind That have perhaps blown them away Beyond redemption And those black board and chalks The windows red and pink The turquoise ink The blinking blue hazes of time A blurred paradigm We build to break No deep breath Whispers the breeze through the chime _______________________________________ April 20, 2018
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July 2, 2018 at 12:10 PM
Hi PG.. Congrats on being a featured poet this week. This poem is certainly worthy of that recognition. Blessings! Come see me...
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July 3, 2018 at 8:16 AM
Thank you, Lyric ... I am sorry I have been a little irregular at poetry soup of late ...
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April 20, 2018 at 6:55 AM
Great work Probir!
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April 20, 2018 at 10:52 AM
Thank you ...
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April 20, 2018 at 5:13 AM
- A wonderful poem, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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April 20, 2018 at 10:53 AM
Thank you, Sunshine ...
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April 19, 2018 at 11:20 PM
Your imagery is fabulous, Probir, enjoyed reading ... Hugs dear friend
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April 20, 2018 at 10:57 AM
Thank you, Eve
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