The Deed

Many’s the man who wished that he could And often’s the time he knew that he should And given the option, he thought that he would But the Deed was accomplished by someone Who did!

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Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 6/18/2018 11:43:00 AM

Very apt and cleverly put.

Brian Densham
Date: 7/8/2018 11:59:00 AM

Thank you!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/4/2018 3:49:00 PM

Sweet write, there are those who act and those who think and think and think, nice to be in the middle, act when it's time. Nice write thanks for the good read Brian

Brian Densham
Date: 7/8/2018 11:59:00 AM

Thanks so much!

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/4/2018 1:51:00 PM

Well penned, Brian.

Brian Densham
Date: 6/4/2018 2:48:00 PM

Thank you so much!

Brian Densham

Date: 6/4/2018 12:53:00 PM

I categorized this as "people" although really it's about responsibility, stepping up, individualism, altruism, helping or any number of other related categories that I cannot find in teh list.