The Debt

Oh Darling,
Although poor,
My debt to you, in pure
Gold I shall pay:
LOVE!



© Demetrios Trifiatis
30 NOVEMBER 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 9:26 AM
I believe romanticism is a peek at heaven so I suspect it will be very much present in the next world.
Thirtyseven Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 11:41 PM
If only there was enough gold...
Trifiatis Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 5:17 AM
You are absolutely right my friend, Scott! Love's value is incalculable! thank you for visiting and commenting!
Bateman Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 9:50 AM
Demetrios . . . Most moving here!! LOVE is priceless and the most wonderful payment possible. Best Wishes!! Gary
Trifiatis Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 7:30 AM
Yes, Gary, love's value is priceless even much more than gold or any precious stone! Thank you for visiting my friend.
Ellison Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 6:41 AM
You old romantic dog!!! With us two guys promoting it... love will never die! LOL
Ellison Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 7:20 AM
Probably... but heaven will be the benefactors of our charm and loving natures!
Trifiatis Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 7:12 AM
Jack, my friend, I thought I was a member of the human race but I see you placed me among the members of...yours, LOL! Ha-ha! Thank you my friend. Do you think that when we go to a better place, romanticism will die with us as well?
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 10:44 PM
Love is golden, like the sun. Wonderful.
Trifiatis Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 7:12 AM
Thank you, Andrea!
Roper Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 12:40 AM
what a nice gift to give
Trifiatis Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 3:53 AM
What a lovely visit! Thank you, Eve!
Sathasivam Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 12:14 AM
Great sentiment. I feel it. Thanks for sharing.
Trifiatis Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 4:47 AM
Happy it touched your heart, Dear Ravi!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 8:57 AM
You have layed a treasure at our feet!
Trifiatis Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 4:45 AM
Thank you for the riches of your comment, dear Richard! Greatly appreciated!
Allison Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 8:54 AM
stunning sentiment Demetrios there can be no finer gift - and its free! Hugs jan xx
Trifiatis Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 4:50 AM
Thank you, Jan, for your heartfelt comment and hugs!
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 7:18 AM
Love is the purest finest gold.
Trifiatis Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 4:50 AM
...so we are in agreement, dear Brenda!
Smith Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 6:58 AM
Exactly how I feel my friend.... Cheers
Trifiatis Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 4:52 AM
Very delighted to know that I have expressed your innermost feelings my dear friend, Timothy! Thank you!
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 2:26 AM
My dear friend Demetrios this is so beautiful and romantic! Wow! You blew me away with this one,...:) so very sweet and full of love for your beloved. A 7 +++++for you! Enjoyed it! Have a very lovely Sunday! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
Trifiatis Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 5:03 AM
Thank you so much my sweet romantic friend, Dorian! You so gracious!
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