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The Death Pose

dinosaurs wilted their floppy necks curled foetal position defeated by life lights suddenly out cruel death peaceful AP: 3rd place 2020 Submitted on June 18, 2018 for contest WHEN SIX LINES IS A PERFECT FIX sponsored by SILENT ONE - RANKED 2ND

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Eve Roper

Date: 6/23/2018 8:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Line, ... Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/23/2018 11:07:00 PM

Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/23/2018 4:44:00 PM

An awesome poem and a great title, Line. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/23/2018 11:08:00 PM

Thank you, Susan. Can't take all the credit here.

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/22/2018 9:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with these six lines, creative. :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/23/2018 7:28:00 AM

Thank, Susan. Much appreciated.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 6/22/2018 1:40:00 AM

Congratulations, Line on your win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/22/2018 7:53:00 AM

Thank you, Subimal.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/20/2018 7:02:00 PM

Back with congrats on your placement in the contest, Line! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/20/2018 10:47:00 PM

Thank you so much for coming back, Gershon.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/20/2018 6:50:00 PM

- A skilled and great 6 line poem, from you Line :) - It must have been difficult to judge, I think everyone is amazing, with different themes - Congratulations on a well deserved 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne -Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/20/2018 10:47:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated.

Silent One

Date: 6/20/2018 3:54:00 PM

Great take on the contest Line.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/20/2018 10:48:00 PM

Thank you so much, SO. Fun series of challenges.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/19/2018 9:11:00 PM

Nice blending of title, poem, and esp. that sixth line. Can and did read this one several times. :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/19/2018 10:02:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gershon.