The Death of Me

You tear me down
But then try
To pick me up
You break my heart
Then try to fix it
You play with my emotions
As if they didnt care
How do you feel
That you will be
The death of me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 12:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry with us today Allison. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
December 16, 2009 at 5:34 PM
Interesting topic that you have chosen to write a poem about. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Sara
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December 16, 2009 at 5:33 PM
this is a good poem, i hope they'll make up their minds, will they help you or not-----Ell
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