The Death of Colour

Held apart by oceans of black,
This sordid track
That we scrambled across to see if love’s true,
If eyelashes would sink with stars or dew,
Or hearts would burst from passion’s hue.

A rounded tear of violet’s pain,
Held all my disdain
Bottled up under a hooded eye,
A cracked smile smothered a lie,
All this time I’ve been waiting to die…

You forced a consistent frown,
Whilst oblivious in brown,
I was coerced into a summer sea,
So muddily deep you lost the key
To a heart of something as caged as me.

Blinded by a piercing white,
You smiled on, despite
The charcoal letters spitting hate,
Brown so thick you could not sate,
My cracked, uneven, stone wash plate.

And when we met colours did shrink,
For who would ever think
That brown would mix with blue?
No-one.
And so this greyscale did spew
Across lands, engulfing all hue,

For jaded love would never cause such pain
When instead of colour, lies a hollow drain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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King Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 12:13 PM
Thank you all.
Brown Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 10:37 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Holly. Love, Carol
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August 15, 2010 at 7:03 PM
Congrats on your poem " The Death of Colour " being featured this week, enjoyed the read..P.D.
Brown Avatar
August 11, 2010 at 9:14 AM
What wonderful poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I have not read a bad poem yet today. I am enjoying reading each and everyone from old poets and new poets alike. Lots of amazing contest entries also. Thank you for sharing yours with us today Holly. Love, Carol
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