The Death Comet

On the tail of Halley's comet
Is a land that's seldom seen
A place neither here nor there
For it's simply inbetween

A land of many treausres
Of things we thought were lost
It carries all our forgotten dreams
Each time our path is crossed

For only once in a lifetime
Most will see this comet's face
While some will see it maybe twice
As it journeys throughout space

Seventy-five years to travel the earth
In it's quest to steal our dreams
For once we've seen the comet's tail
Life's now shorter than it seems

So the next time you see the comet
Don't forget to look at its tail
You'll see the land of stolen dreams
Before your heart begins to fail

And when you die your dreams are seen
Before you take your final breath
So now you know the comet's true name
It's called the comet of death
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 11:46 AM
Very interesting. Nice write, Larry. rgds Ralph
Milgate Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 8:16 AM
Like the image of Comet carrying away our dreams in its icy tail. Nice write.
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