The Death

The death is not an end
It is a final Exam
Evaluating the whole life
If win
Someone realizes 
The depth of absence
If fail
Just become 
A framed still picture 
On the wall .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Reith Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 6:35 AM
Thought provoking and final. One to keep in mind. Thanks jk
Britt Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 7:26 PM
Those last three lines are SERIOUSLY DEEP! <3
Chakrapany Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 9:13 PM
thank you .jk
Chakrapany Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 11:13 PM
thank you .jk
Andresen Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 10:15 AM
No one can answer what death is....but maybe you`re right....well written poem jk. - oxox Anne-Lise
Chakrapany Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 10:46 AM
thank you .jk
Hu Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 4:57 AM
True to core:)
Chakrapany Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 7:05 AM
thank you .jk
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