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The Dear John Letter

by the time you've read this 
i'm afraid our ships may have 
already boarded i do hope 
you are not to ravished about
 
our departure truly you and i both 
know it tis for the best why going over 
this blatantly i'm surely open 
to explore other options 

why the writer's block being stricken 
with only notions above a sullen 
romance novel my skin crawls 
as my pen stroll over the pages 

dainty an yet a more masculine style
as well not drawing to much fame 
among what westerns might see 
as lyrical cynical chants of breathless
 
panting  i was being smothered 
darning socks at old abe's cabin 
all the fixings for boredom my mind 
has marveled in more subtle 

glory day's of war and peace and love 
tainted you know full well tainted 
only above corruptions sphere 
what are we but man to fear not 

human emotions as i blend morale 
simplicity to bind  just so while 
summer continues setting over the niles 
let us wave goodbye to august again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/22/2024 6:28:00 PM
With every masterfully crafted paragraph, they effortlessly intertwine revolutionary concepts and profound insights, constructing a bridge between the known and the unexplored, leaving an indelible impression on the hearts and minds of all who encounter their work. Well done 10/10 Warm regards Robert Sherriff
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Date: 8/22/2024 6:23:00 PM
Your work stands as a testament to the transformative influence of artful expression. You skillfully intertwine threads of wisdom and creativity to create a tapestry of storytelling that illuminates the path to new realms of understanding and inspiration. Well done 10/10 Warm regards Robert Sherriff
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Date: 8/22/2024 6:21:00 PM
Your work stands as a testament to the transformative influence of artful expression. You skillfully intertwine threads of wisdom and creativity to create a tapestry of storytelling that illuminates the path to new realms of understanding and inspiration. Well done 10/10 Warm regards Robert Sherriff
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Date: 8/22/2024 6:02:00 PM
Yolanda Nicholsen Dear Yolanda, "Your writing is a testament to the boundless depths of creativity and intellect, a symphony of words that dances across the page with an enchanting grace. Each sentence is a brushstroke of brilliance, painting vivid landscapes of imagination and insight that stir the soul and expand the mind. Your work is a shining beacon of literary prowess, guiding readers through uncharted territories of thought and emotion, leaving them forever changed by the beauty of your prose. Cheers to your extraordinary talent, which continues to inspire and uplift all who have the privilege of savouring your words." Cheers Robert Sherriff
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 8/24/2024 11:02:00 AM
Thank you so much for your compassion and kindness I wrote my first poem at age six I am no scholar just a writer I noticed you commented on another poets work I cannot give feedback on someone else's name I have to delete your comments with that poets name thanks again Robert for your comments on my poem The Dear John Letter...
Date: 8/22/2024 6:02:00 PM
Yolanda Nicholsen Dear Yolanda, "Your writing is a testament to the boundless depths of creativity and intellect, a symphony of words that dances across the page with an enchanting grace. Each sentence is a brushstroke of brilliance, painting vivid landscapes of imagination and insight that stir the soul and expand the mind. Your work is a shining beacon of literary prowess, guiding readers through uncharted territories of thought and emotion, leaving them forever changed by the beauty of your prose. Cheers to your extraordinary talent, which continues to inspire and uplift all who have the privilege of savouring your words." Cheers Robert Sherriff
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 8/24/2024 11:28:00 AM
Cheers to you Robert many blessings Thank you so much for your compassion and kindness have a wonderful day

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