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The Dear John Letter

by the time you've read this i'm afraid our ships may have already boarded i do hope you are not to ravished about our departure truly you and i both know it tis for the best why going over this blatantly i'm surely open to explore other options why the writer's block being stricken with only notions above a sullen romance novel my skin crawls as my pen stroll over the pages dainty an yet a more masculine style as well not drawing to much fame among what westerns might see as lyrical cynical chants of breathless panting i was being smothered darning socks at old abe's cabin all the fixings for boredom my mind has marveled in more subtle glory day's of war and peace and love tainted you know full well tainted only above corruptions sphere what are we but man to fear not human emotions as i blend morale simplicity to bind just so while summer continues setting over the niles let us wave goodbye to august again

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Date: 8/22/2024 6:28:00 PM
With every masterfully crafted paragraph, they effortlessly intertwine revolutionary concepts and profound insights, constructing a bridge between the known and the unexplored, leaving an indelible impression on the hearts and minds of all who encounter their work. Well done 10/10 Warm regards Robert Sherriff
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Date: 8/22/2024 6:23:00 PM
Your work stands as a testament to the transformative influence of artful expression. You skillfully intertwine threads of wisdom and creativity to create a tapestry of storytelling that illuminates the path to new realms of understanding and inspiration. Well done 10/10 Warm regards Robert Sherriff
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Date: 8/22/2024 6:21:00 PM
Your work stands as a testament to the transformative influence of artful expression. You skillfully intertwine threads of wisdom and creativity to create a tapestry of storytelling that illuminates the path to new realms of understanding and inspiration. Well done 10/10 Warm regards Robert Sherriff
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Date: 8/22/2024 6:02:00 PM
Yolanda Nicholsen Dear Yolanda, "Your writing is a testament to the boundless depths of creativity and intellect, a symphony of words that dances across the page with an enchanting grace. Each sentence is a brushstroke of brilliance, painting vivid landscapes of imagination and insight that stir the soul and expand the mind. Your work is a shining beacon of literary prowess, guiding readers through uncharted territories of thought and emotion, leaving them forever changed by the beauty of your prose. Cheers to your extraordinary talent, which continues to inspire and uplift all who have the privilege of savouring your words." Cheers Robert Sherriff
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 8/24/2024 11:02:00 AM
Thank you so much for your compassion and kindness I wrote my first poem at age six I am no scholar just a writer I noticed you commented on another poets work I cannot give feedback on someone else's name I have to delete your comments with that poets name thanks again Robert for your comments on my poem The Dear John Letter...
Date: 8/22/2024 6:02:00 PM
Yolanda Nicholsen Dear Yolanda, "Your writing is a testament to the boundless depths of creativity and intellect, a symphony of words that dances across the page with an enchanting grace. Each sentence is a brushstroke of brilliance, painting vivid landscapes of imagination and insight that stir the soul and expand the mind. Your work is a shining beacon of literary prowess, guiding readers through uncharted territories of thought and emotion, leaving them forever changed by the beauty of your prose. Cheers to your extraordinary talent, which continues to inspire and uplift all who have the privilege of savouring your words." Cheers Robert Sherriff
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 8/24/2024 11:28:00 AM
Cheers to you Robert many blessings Thank you so much for your compassion and kindness have a wonderful day

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