The Dead

Ring-a-ling, it's scintillating Spring What a hummer -- sizzling Summer Have a ball! It's foliage Fall The absolute pits, sir ~ The DEAD of winter

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P.S. Awtry

Date: 2/18/2019 12:42:00 PM

this made me chuckle. the contrast...love that first line :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/18/2019 2:53:00 PM

Alright then: Let's bring on Spring!!!! :) gw

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/18/2019 8:51:00 AM

Another "fav"; this is so true.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/18/2019 2:53:00 PM

Whoa. I so rarely get FAV'd, and now back-to-back. Thank you so much, M.L. Deeply appreciated. ~ Gershon

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 2/17/2019 11:02:00 PM

I saw a strip of blue sky today, and for a minute I was happy - then winter came back :(

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/18/2019 3:14:00 PM

Yup. I know that drill --- just the reverse of Florida this time of year, where you might catch a passing cloud for a minute, 'till the sky is all-clear again. :) gw

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 2/17/2019 8:07:00 PM

Oh, perfect. ;o*

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/17/2019 10:49:00 PM

Ah, yes: 'Till the DEAD do us part... ~ gw