The Dead

Ring-a-ling, it's scintillating Spring
What a hummer -- sizzling Summer
Have a ball! It's foliage Fall
  The absolute pits, sir
  ~ The DEAD of winter

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P.S. Awtry

February 18, 2019 at 12:42 PM

this made me chuckle. the contrast...love that first line :)

Gershon Wolf

February 18, 2019 at 2:53 PM

Alright then: Let's bring on Spring!!!! :) gw

M. L. Kiser

February 18, 2019 at 8:51 AM

Another "fav"; this is so true.

Gershon Wolf

February 18, 2019 at 2:53 PM

Whoa. I so rarely get FAV'd, and now back-to-back. Thank you so much, M.L. Deeply appreciated. ~ Gershon

Michelle Faulkner

February 17, 2019 at 11:02 PM

I saw a strip of blue sky today, and for a minute I was happy - then winter came back :(

Gershon Wolf

February 18, 2019 at 3:14 PM

Yup. I know that drill --- just the reverse of Florida this time of year, where you might catch a passing cloud for a minute, 'till the sky is all-clear again. :) gw