The Daytime Moon

In my restive mind keen time raced in spree,
me in the wasteland of life I could see
as fallen defoliated dry tree,
you came as rain cloud gray - drifted away, didn’t stay,
mid-day sun’s sparkling ray - ushered for me new day.
I saw the daytime crescent moon shine bright,
as the orb slowly climbed up the sky’s height,
felt lunar vibes in awe-inspiring sight.
The unique astral show - helped hopeful omen glow,
good luck in life would flow - pull me up from the low.
Mind’s balance it enhanced to great degree,
out of plaguing terrain I found a way.
Image of self-reflection came to light,
perceived the awareness of life’s change grow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kauffman Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 12:04 PM
Congratulations on your win Subimal.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 10:06 PM
Thank you, Sam.
Richards Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 1:17 AM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win in in my The Moon by Day contest, Subimal, with this introspective entry. I have soup-mailed you.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 10:06 PM
Thank you, Suzette for the placement. I have replied to your mail.
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