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The Daytime Moon

In my restive mind keen time raced in spree, me in the wasteland of life I could see as fallen defoliated dry tree, you came as rain cloud gray - drifted away, didn’t stay, mid-day sun’s sparkling ray - ushered for me new day. I saw the daytime crescent moon shine bright, as the orb slowly climbed up the sky’s height, felt lunar vibes in awe-inspiring sight. The unique astral show - helped hopeful omen glow, good luck in life would flow - pull me up from the low. Mind’s balance it enhanced to great degree, out of plaguing terrain I found a way. Image of self-reflection came to light, perceived the awareness of life’s change grow.

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Date: 7/6/2023 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Subimal.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/10/2023 10:06:00 PM
Thank you, Sam.
Date: 7/6/2023 1:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win in in my The Moon by Day contest, Subimal, with this introspective entry. I have soup-mailed you.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/10/2023 10:06:00 PM
Thank you, Suzette for the placement. I have replied to your mail.

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