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The Day You Went Away

I came to say goodbye Because I only said "hi" It happened so fast The hi came My name happened Your name happened A life became You called me "my wonderful daughter" You cared You loved all You were patient You loved peace The day you went away, I had the worst nightmare At noon, in broad daylight during my nap Subconsciously I was terrified of death Yet that was the only thing that I felt I needed I stood on top of the highest building and gravity was pulling me down I feared death I wanted death I woke up angry and scared I said my prayers asking for the safety of all my loved ones I wasn't ready to let go of anyone Not even myself But an angel was already home Goodbye Till we meet again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/16/2015 1:37:00 PM
A beautiful poem full of emotion, with nicely depicted emotion of a loved one now gone...Thanks for sharing//hugs and blessings
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 12/20/2015 5:55:00 AM
Thank you Lewis .
Date: 12/14/2015 3:44:00 AM
A well-woven piece. But what is this poem about?
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 12/20/2015 5:52:00 AM
Hey hi, this poem is about losing someone that i knew to death. Thank you Hannington

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