The Day You Promised

The day you promised to me in that call,
The new city you'd left us for in the fall. 
"The education there is great," you say,
"And the sights are worth staring at all day."
Still, Mother and I, we aren't too sure 
If all of the things there are truly pure. 
Drowning in money, floating in fame,
We would never go back to being the same.
You gave us the oath to soon be back
And put our dead lives right on track. 

The day you promised to step through that door
To revisit the little girl that you adore. 
I waited and dreamed and wouldn't let go
Of the thought that left my eyes aglow 
I checked the calendar everyday
Waiting for me to be able to say 
"My daddy is home! He is finally back!"
At last there's somebody to fix the crack
It's streaked across my heart from when
Momma had told me my birth was a sin. 

The day you promised to relive our lives
The way it was before the cries. 
It's finally today, a whole year later
I sprint off the bus and pass the skater
And I don't stop until I eventually reach
That tree that holds a single peach. 
I swing open the door and close it inside 
There's no sound to be muted, no places to hide. 
So I sit and wait for your weary return
But I slowly begin to feel my body burn. 

I should've known as I quietly laid 
In the darkened, bleak, and heavy night shade
No bother to eat, no bother to shower
Just waiting as my dried tears turned sour. 
My eyes watered again as I was forced to remember
The faint days when we were all happy together. 
When all alone, I wondered "What's wrong?
What did I do to make you stay gone?"
I've finally learned, for Heaven's sake 
Promises made can easily break.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 5/2/2014 7:39:00 AM
Enjoyed the write. Congrats on the win, Aleece
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Date: 5/1/2014 11:02:00 AM
it's an Honor, to be the first to comment on your poem Aleece, ... Congratulations! Enjoying every entry, ENTERED in my "Any Poem #26" contest. Always & Forever *LINDA"
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