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The Day When Close Your Eyes

I Heard Persons Cry;
Saying I Can't Believe You Die
Without A Word from Your Mouth
From This Earth You Say Bye
Your Sun Was rise But Now It Set
You’re Gone; Loudly We Wept 
I Was Shock;
Wishing I Could See You Back
On Our Body, Our Clothes Painted In Black
I Cry Tears
Feeling Empty Like Ah Shop without Stock
Deep within Me I Was Grieve,
You Have Pass Away I Couldn't Believe 
You Are Missed By Family Friends and Relative;
But That's Life, God Take and Give 
On Our Face It Covers With Darkness;
We Stay Strong But Felt Like It Was Hopeless
Thinking About the Time We Spent 
The Joyful Moment;
Felt like The Life Living Now Is Dent
When Your Casket Open; Looking On Your Face;
I cried out, although in Heaven you’re gone to Fulfil Your Space
Whether at School There Was Your Empty Desk, Around the Family Table at Dinner They Look at Your Empty Chair;'
Sadness and Memories Evaporates In the Atmosphere 
“Ashes to Ashes Dust To Dust” Says the Pastor
You’re Parents Cry out Loud Missing the Child They Nurture
God Knows Best He Is the Creator
Faces Covered With H2O
When Under the Ground They Are Pushing Your Body Low
Attendance Mourn and Weep
Knowing Your 2+4 Feet Deep;
Writing This Status Poetry Tears was dropping on Ma Phone
Crying! It’s Not Me Alone
Your Grave Decorated With Flowers
Missing You the Same after Countless Hours;
Done By: Davian Evans

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/19/2024 10:46:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/23/2016 9:38:00 PM
Davian Evans, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/2/2016 12:08:00 AM
HAPPY NEW YEAR
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Date: 4/16/2013 4:55:00 PM
Davian :-). Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT
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