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The Day the Sun Showed Out After the Eclipse

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AFTER THE ECLIPSE

If there be a tomorrow

Let it be filled with the Awesome light
After the eclipse.
Let the things that have not happened yet;
be filled with joy and promise
Instead of sorrowful regrets.

If there be a tomorrow...

Let there be; No more 
long and lonely days stewing,
people pining in fear.
Let us see OUR future thrive.

If there be a tomorrow; 

Let it be void of hate.
Let not yesterday’s agony 
be the feature of today.
Leave the sorted past of all our sorrows,
In the heap of fatal woes.


If there be a tomorrow.

Let it be void of hate.
Let not yesterday’s agony 
be the feature of today.
Leave the sorted past of all our sorrows,
In the heap of fatal woes.
Cover them and bury them 
in the ever-sinking holes.

If there be a tomorrow

If anyone wants to see the past return, 
remove them from the now.
Let us advance, and leave them stranded, 
in the torment of their own minds.

If there be a tomorrow; 

Let not those who oppose the 
advancement of mankind,
Follow us into the new moon.
Leave them, in yesterday, 
“where their hearts are.” 
Let them: Waddle in yesterday’s grief 
And the misery they have caused; 
With faces of stone, 
They still proudly own, yesterday’s grief:
Those opposed to relief, and
whose beliefs? Lies in the past.

If there be a tomorrow: 

“Let us move on, and look forward...
towards the new sun”; 
After the eclipse:  
God’s presence has been shown,
and{shone}
Let us move on, into the new dawn!

 

If there be a tomorrow Let it be filled with the Awesome light After the eclipse. Let the things that have not happened yet; be filled with joy and promise Instead of sorrowful regrets. If there be a tomorrow... Let there be; No more long and lonely days stewing, people pining in fear. Let us see OUR future thrive. If there be a tomorrow; Let it be void of hate. Let not yesterday’s agony be the feature of today. Leave the sorted past of all our sorrows, In the heap of fatal woes. If there be a tomorrow Let it be void of hate. Let not yesterday’s agony be the feature of today. Leave the sorted past of all our sorrows, In the heap of fatal woes. Cover them and bury them in the ever-sinking holes. If there be a tomorrow. If anyone wants to see the past return, remove them from the now. Let us advance, and leave them stranded, in the torment of their own minds. If there be a tomorrow; Let not those who oppose the advancement of mankind, Follow us into the new moon. Leave them, in yesterday, “where their hearts are.” Let them: Waddle in yesterday’s grief And the misery they have caused; With faces of stone, They still proudly own, yesterday’s grief: Those opposed to relief, and whose beliefs? Lies in the past. If there be a tomorrow: “Let us move on, and look forward... towards the new sun”; After the eclipse: God’s presence has been shown, and{shone} Let us move on, into the new dawn!

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Date: 8/22/2017 11:01:00 PM
Wonderful work, Vicki - my take on the eclipse was about hate also ... we must keep trying, love is the answer. I enjoyed everything about this, and on many levels - exceptional work!
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Vicki Acquah
Date: 8/23/2017 12:07:00 AM
I will read your rendition, when i get to my phone. Thank you poet.??

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