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The Day She Left

The day you left Me it was like a dream with No End, The day they told me I won't see you No more was like a Sad dream with No end, who will teach me the things you taught me, The day they Told me I won't see you No more I could not believe my ears for it was you who taught me everything About love, life, and cooking, Grandmom you left a huge whole in my heart with no healing I do not care about who says what you were the one and I salute thee, The love you showed was amazing, I Remember when you Told me a real man Do not cry, But I can't help my tears today maybe am crying because I know you do not have pains no more therefore am happy, But there whole of Sadness in my heart is still deep, but I Salute thee for the love and free life lessons, The day yyou left me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/21/2016 10:22:00 PM
hope to see you back this year...2016
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Date: 10/14/2013 4:28:00 AM
WOw! This is such a warm welcom thanx guys for Welcoming me my name is sipumeze from South africa Johannerburg, am currently under a lot of stress now as I Recently got paralyzed from a terremble accident but I kno God will never dissapoint me He cares a lot about me so ja maaan! Thank you guys
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Date: 10/13/2013 7:50:00 PM
Sipumeze. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/13/2013 7:25:00 AM
wow, wow, this is deep love the ending, Sipumeze , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/13/2013 4:09:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup,Sipumeze ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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