The Day She Left

The day you left Me it was like a 
dream with No End, The day they 
told me I won't see you No more 
was like a Sad dream with No end, 
who will teach me the things you 
taught me, The day they Told me I 
won't see you No more I could not 
believe my ears for it was you who 
taught me everything About love, 
life, and cooking, Grandmom you 
left a huge whole in my heart with 
no healing I do not care about who 
says what you were the one and I 
salute thee, The love you showed 
was amazing, I Remember when 
you Told me a real man Do not cry, 
But I can't help my tears today 
maybe am crying because I know 
you do not have pains no more 
therefore am happy, But there 
whole of Sadness in my heart is still 
deep, but I Salute thee for the love 
and free life lessons,
The day yyou left me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 21, 2016 at 10:22 PM
hope to see you back this year...2016
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October 14, 2013 at 4:28 AM
WOw! This is such a warm welcom thanx guys for Welcoming me my name is sipumeze from South africa Johannerburg, am currently under a lot of stress now as I Recently got paralyzed from a terremble accident but I kno God will never dissapoint me He cares a lot about me so ja maaan! Thank you guys
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October 13, 2013 at 7:50 PM
Sipumeze. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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October 13, 2013 at 7:25 AM
wow, wow, this is deep love the ending, Sipumeze , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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October 13, 2013 at 4:09 AM
Welcome to P-Soup,Sipumeze ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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