The Day She Disappeared

A collaboration between Paul Callus & Carolyn Devonshire
 
Where were you when she disappeared?
Is the moment caught in your mind?
Were you nervous as the day neared,
or to its approach were you blind?
 
     She took the lonely winding road
     towards the hills in purple haze.
     The weary sun took one last look
     then cast away its fading rays.
 
Were you watching the sun go down?
Did you grasp the consequences?
Did you see sunset's halo crown;
did waning light stir your senses?
 
     She walked ahead; not once looked back
     nor did she pause or hesitate.
     As shadows fell to twilight’s touch
     she came at last to heaven’s gate.
 
Did you imagine her entry
to God's heavenly, lasting life?
Could you see the guarding sentry
as the joy in heaven was rife?
 
     She left behind no next of kin,
     no faithful fans or floodlit stage.
     The only ones who mourned for her
     were a few friends of ripened age.
 
If no one recalls her passage,
does that mean she did not exist?
When the reaper sends his carriage,
do our thoughts of loved ones desist?
 
     More autumns came and winters too
     remaining leaves withered and fell
     since her soul rose into the blue.        
     Is there no more story to tell?




I thank Paul for joining me in this collaboration and apologize for taking so long to post it.  As some of you know, my house flooded and I've been dealing with health issues as well.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 10/14/2016 10:07:00 AM
Great collaboration, asks many deep questions, wishing the best outcome for you Carolyn, All the best, Keith
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Date: 10/9/2016 9:41:00 AM
Lovely poem, thank you both for sharing. Good luck with the flood and be well soon!
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Date: 9/24/2016 1:59:00 AM
A bittersweet poem.... nicely done
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Date: 9/23/2016 4:28:00 PM
Wow and amazing write by both of you but also sad thoughts in that poem. love phyl
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Date: 9/21/2016 8:05:00 AM
Hi Carolyn! At last I managed to stop by to read both poem and the lovely comments that have been coming in. I am so glad to see you posting again, despite the setbacks. This is one of our best co-writes, and as always it was a pleasure mixing ink with yours:) Congrats on p.o.t.d. A fav...and big hugs. // paul
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Date: 9/21/2016 1:19:00 AM
Wow, that's really sad and thought provoking, well done !
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Date: 9/19/2016 6:29:00 AM
Collaborative efforts tend to be very good or very bad, few in between. This one (in my humble opinion) is great. Well done both of you.
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Date: 9/17/2016 2:31:00 AM
You cradle me in the beauty of your images. Clearly drawn from the exquisiteness lives inside of you. You are a rare, kind, gentle soul. What a pleasure it is to inhale your poetry. A Fav. Lots Of Love, my friend, always armand.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/17/2016 4:02:00 AM
Wow, thank you so very much Armand. I really appreciate your lovely comment and your faving this poem! Blessings, Connie ; )
Date: 9/16/2016 9:01:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD. A great collaboration from you both. Sorry to hear you are dealing with flooding Carolyn. I will send some prayers your way. Blues d ings, Connie : ) 7
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Date: 9/16/2016 3:35:00 PM
many congrats Paul and Carolyn:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/16/2016 12:44:00 PM
- Really nice to read poems from you Carolyn - A wonderful co - write - A 7, without a doubt - Congratulations on p.o.t.d. - Best wishes and a delightful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/16/2016 11:52:00 AM
Beautiful and sad. A great POTD.
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Date: 9/16/2016 10:42:00 AM
Superb. Very brilliant piece. Enjoyed from top to bottom.A 7 & fav from me. Big congrats to both of u for ur well deserving POTD.
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Date: 9/16/2016 8:55:00 AM
This is so exquisite and sensitive!Made me read it again and again!Thanks for sharing, you two!
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Date: 9/16/2016 7:54:00 AM
This is so sad but I suppose life itself is a tragedy. Congratulations Carolyn and Paul on POTD. This is absolutely a magnificent collaboration. I love it!
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Date: 9/16/2016 7:38:00 AM
Hi Carolyn: A lovely poetic fanfare. I really loved your wordage!
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Date: 9/15/2016 1:37:00 PM
Enjoyed reading the collaboration..Thanks for stopping by..Sara..Most people pass without much fanfare or tears..Only a few in life get a send off like some former presidents, movie stars, or a very young person in a tragic accident..
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 9/15/2016 4:46:00 PM
Indeed, that's true. Unless we have had some special impact, memories of us fade as time passes. When the last person who knew you passes on, there is little or no memory left.
Date: 9/15/2016 12:27:00 PM
Yeah I'm just going to fav this poem by two great poets. What a treat, thank you. Lots of Love, armand.
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Date: 9/14/2016 3:45:00 PM
Re poe...Fantastic collab...Love it indeed dear friends.
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Date: 9/14/2016 3:44:00 PM
Oh dear Caroline..Im not here as often but am so good to see you here...Im sorry fr your flooding and hope you re getting better..hugs xxx
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Date: 9/14/2016 3:36:00 PM
Such an emotional poem Carolyn and Paul. The ending made me feel quite emotional ..someone so alone in the world and few even knowing of their passing- makes me think of some of the folks in mum's care home who never have visitors from one week to the next:-( hugs Jan xx
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/21/2016 8:12:00 AM
Thank you for the feedback, Jan; I can understand how you relate to this poem...like you, I've often visited care homes, and I get similar feelings. Hugs // paul
Date: 9/14/2016 2:53:00 PM
When I'm gone will anyone remember I lived and walked and breathed? Your piece cannot help but bring this thought to mind. All sorts of questions come to mind actually. Good stuff, Carolyn and Paul. Love, Dave
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/21/2016 8:13:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by Dave. All the best...paul
Date: 9/14/2016 2:07:00 PM
Hello Carolyn ...good to see you... a moving write...great collaboration....best wishes
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Date: 9/14/2016 1:25:00 PM
This is such a tremendous transpiring poem Carolyn and Paul. It makes me think. A favorite for me. Hope you are doing well. Go 'noles...
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 9/14/2016 1:46:00 PM
I follow the Ohio State Buckeyes as a dear friend of mine was a graduate. I hope your team does well this year!
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/14/2016 1:37:00 PM
Only the highlights. My oldest is going to Iowa so have been rooting for the Hawkeye's.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 9/14/2016 1:30:00 PM
Thank you for reading, Tim. This poem means a lot to me. Have you seen either of the Seminoles' games this season? Wow, that Deondre Francois is amazing -- like Jameis Winston. Let me check to see one of your poems. Go 'Noles !!
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