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The Day Our Moon Died

I awoke one morning It was incredibly bright I drew back the curtains To a most amazing sight It was like we had two suns Orange orbs, floating in the sky The heat that was being emitted I felt the atmosphere dry I turned on the TV It must be on the news From where i stand Surely I'm not the only view Is it a phenomenon Or nature playing her tricks The camera crews are at NASA Lets see what they make of it Deep in outer space An explosion we can't comprehend Has sent a massive meteor To our moon it's journey ends Our world is now in peril The Moon held us stable Can us scientists do something I'm not sure we are able There will never be many times When the whole world stopped and stared But this is one of those times We have every right to be scared http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy-8.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/20/2009 7:40:00 AM
haha cool but frightening dang I would flip out if the moon did die n.e wayz love ur poems keep writing!...~^*Nemo*^~
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Date: 11/15/2009 2:54:00 PM
Very scary thing to contemplate, I been viewing a lot of TV lately, about such possibilities. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 11/15/2009 1:01:00 PM
Would be scary. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/14/2009 4:48:00 PM
Well-written fantasy, James! Scary but nothing should surprise us today. Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 11/14/2009 11:49:00 AM
Well, James, Perhaps a cleansed earth will live in peace 1,000 years! Is it about to begin? Prepare, just in case the time is next week. You made me feel this one. Very effective writing. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 11/14/2009 7:20:00 AM
I hope my Moon never dies Fraser,Scary indeed,dont want to think it can happen..enjoy reading you ..Poor Mr Moon:)..Charma
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Date: 11/14/2009 6:22:00 AM
Reality check poem.. excellent thoughts and write.. but... hope it does not come true... what will all the lovers do if the Moon dies... ??? always enjoy your poetry .. luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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