Kanishka Subramaniyan Poet Elegy

The Day of Lose

The man who taught us a lot..
Was the one who made us to fail that day.
The man who was most fond of us on that day
Has now become as our foe
As he gone separable from us!
The person whom we hate now
Was the man who provided realms of love that day
He was the same one who made us to beg
For the love which we lost now
The person who makes us to cherish that day
Become as a heartless stabber
Who made us to shed tears now..
The day which have gone frozen for us
Was the day which we felt helpless
The moments which we learned more
Were those ones when we felt ourselves
As the helpless zombies
We bid adieu for the prayers to the shepherd
As he made us to stood alone without you
The day we felt void within us
Was the day we lost you my buddy..

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Beata Agustin October 5, 2024 at 5:37 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Faraz Ajmal October 6, 2017 at 11:12 AM A very beautiful written poem, it was sad and full of feelings, your feelings were really clear in this poem and that s what a good poem is, it really touch my heart as it tells the loss, the fears, the injustice, it s simply beautiful, seems like you re new here, so I should welcome you to ps, I m sure that you re gonna love your stay here, continue to write as you write really beautifully and with heart, I ll be looking for your poems, good luck Kanishka Subramaniyan October 7, 2017 at 8:04 AM thnk u for ur regards!!!