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The Day of Lose

The man who taught us a lot.. Was the one who made us to fail that day. The man who was most fond of us on that day Has now become as our foe As he gone separable from us! The person whom we hate now Was the man who provided realms of love that day He was the same one who made us to beg For the love which we lost now The person who makes us to cherish that day Become as a heartless stabber Who made us to shed tears now.. The day which have gone frozen for us Was the day which we felt helpless The moments which we learned more Were those ones when we felt ourselves As the helpless zombies We bid adieu for the prayers to the shepherd As he made us to stood alone without you The day we felt void within us Was the day we lost you my buddy..

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Date: 10/6/2017 11:12:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, it was sad and full of feelings, your feelings were really clear in this poem and that s what a good poem is, it really touch my heart as it tells the loss, the fears, the injustice, it s simply beautiful, seems like you re new here, so I should welcome you to ps, I m sure that you re gonna love your stay here, continue to write as you write really beautifully and with heart, I ll be looking for your poems, good luck
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Kanishka Subramaniyan
Date: 10/7/2017 8:04:00 AM
thnk u for ur regards!!!

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