Katie Telling Poet Rhyme

The Day My Mom Stopped Loving Me

The day my mom stopped loving me
Was not so long ago,
She said she wouldn’t talk to me
For reasons I don’t know.

The day my mom stopped loving me
I knew that all was lost,
Everything is in pieces now
Our relationship the cost.

The day my mom stopped loving me
She left a hole in my heart,
An empty void her love once filled,
That’s now been torn apart.

The day my mom stopped loving me
I still told her “I love you”
But instead of telling me the same
She simply said “thank you.”

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Arthur Vaso May 21, 2025 at 4:40 AM These are shoes I have worn, otherwise hard for anyone to understand.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 8, 2019 at 9:34 AM Oh, this one hits right in the viscera. Some people find it difficult to believe that a mother would withdraw her love; but I know it is true. However sad, this is a refreshing read for me. Hugs Katie, and understanding. xomo Katie Telling August 11, 2019 at 6:27 PM Thank you so much for you comment. I appreciate it more than you know!