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The Day I Stopped Trying

One look is all it took to let me know that whatever I do I shall never ever be good enough for you. That precious bead of time - maybe a minute or two lifetimes somehow while crushing me also miraculously set me free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/5/2012 7:13:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent piece of poetry today Madhumita. I hope this new week ahead proves fruitful to you within your life and in your poetry also. Love, Carol
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Madhu Mita
Date: 3/5/2012 11:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Carol for your kind words. :)

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