Faraz Ajmal Poet Rhyme

The Day I Realized I Was In Love

The first time she kissed me was the day I realized that I was in love
When her lips met mine, my heart exploded so did my mind
It was as if the heavens and the Earth have combined,
There were many people and many sounds but I could only hear one
The voice of her heart, with every beat taking my name and only mine
 
Her arms were giving me an embrace and there I noticed the beauty of her face
Her lips red as a sunset, her face white as a dove, that was the day I fell in love


22 June 2018
A fictional poem
For the  contest" seven lines of Romantic Heaven"
Sponsor " Silent one "

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Reta Pruitt August 19, 2018 at 12:47 AM Faraz...Originally expressed and beautiful, really nice.

Karen Da August 4, 2018 at 4:13 AM This made me smile. Beautiful work and expressively romantic..

Paris-Maree Boreham July 18, 2018 at 5:58 PM Loverly work Faraz Ajmal !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 6, 2018 at 3:09 AM romantic bliss bring you your victory :') thanks for your drop on my page :) smiles ;') //Olive

Anisha Dutta July 1, 2018 at 9:43 PM Congrats on your realization. peace n joy

Robert Lindley July 1, 2018 at 9:42 AM Truly superb my friend. A fav...

Eve Roper June 27, 2018 at 8:05 PM Back with big congratulations on your win. . Hugs Eve ~`*

Cecilia Macfarlane June 27, 2018 at 11:06 AM You captured love in this write beautifully. Congrats on your win!

Pandita Sietesantos June 27, 2018 at 10:07 AM This is such a beautiful, romantic piece that I enjoyed reading, dear Faraz! You are a true romance poet! Congratulations on your win, my friend! Hugs and love. Pandita

Susan Gentry June 25, 2018 at 11:49 PM Congratulations on your win with this beautiful romantic poem in only 7 lines. Well done! :)

Marc Acrich June 25, 2018 at 7:03 PM I like it to me, you are a poet begin to get it right then, come more a nd more like an unraveling of your talent but you are off to a good strt but then who am I to comment.if an idea pops up in your head go to your computer that is what poetry is to me an idea , time , love , hate, regret, money , the idea for poem that is why contest are nice Faraz Ajmal June 26, 2018 at 6:50 AM I think that I am getting what you are trying to say, believe me, in order to write about love, ylu don't necessarily have to be in love, you only required some good imaginations

Mansi Sharma June 25, 2018 at 3:06 PM Romantic to the core! Loved it! Congratulations! :)

Silent One June 25, 2018 at 7:00 AM We never forget that feeling Faraz.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Connie Marcum Wong June 24, 2018 at 7:58 PM A lovely poem that describes the soul shaking bliss that love's euphoria shares. Beautifully written Faraz! : )

Janis Medders Tobechi June 24, 2018 at 6:46 PM I wish you well in the contest. True to heart feelings.

Andrea Dietrich June 24, 2018 at 3:36 PM Gorgeous poetry. And of course, it has to be fictional just for your age!!

Eve Roper June 24, 2018 at 2:46 PM Besma , is so right love and emotion that can have so many levels , but also very painful.. love the poem .. good luck in the contest .

Besma Riabi Dziri June 24, 2018 at 10:39 AM The day you in love fell was the day of a poet's birth! Love is one of life's beauties that stirs every soul's heart and mind.. A beautiful write! The best of luck in the contest Faraz. Stay safe and blessed.

Richard Lamoureux June 24, 2018 at 8:07 AM You are a romantic soul! You made superb use of your seven lines.