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The Day America Stood Still

It just took one day To grab our attention There’s not much to say But lots of reflection. The airplanes they flew Wreaking havoc on all No one had a clue That the towers would fall. Such cowards with hate They claimed so many lives On that terrible date Left husbands without wives. So many were lost Our sisters and brothers Their lives were the cost Plus fathers and mothers. Many stood with awe They were asking why For what they just saw Coming out of the sky. Such terror and fear And so quickly they hit The end may be here Should I run, stand or sit? The heroes did save As many as they could For their lives they gave Not knowing that they would. People hung their flags Keeping their families near Many body bags This horror wasn’t clear. Honoring that morn Our eyes begin to fill The world was torn America stood still.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/6/2010 1:19:00 PM
Powerful poem. Nice use of rhyme to share your thoughts. Congratulations on your win in Dane Ann's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 7/6/2010 7:46:00 AM
Wonderfully incisive write about a day we will always remember. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 7/6/2010 6:43:00 AM
Congrats Kelly on your winning poem in the freedom and liberty contest.. with these wonderful thought provoking words.. enjoy.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation.. AlohA...
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Date: 7/6/2010 4:18:00 AM
Congratulations Kelly on your win in Dane Ann's contest "Liberty and Freedom to Choose". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/21/2009 1:47:00 PM
Tremendous poem and tribute, it's one of these days when you reflect and remember where you were>>James
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Date: 9/20/2009 1:59:00 PM
Yes, the day the world stood still, would describe it very well. Very beautiful written, Kelly, thanks for sharing, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 9/20/2009 7:41:00 AM
"America stood still" -- I don't think the emotion of this day can be stated any more clearly than with these three words. We have to admire the "heroes" who worked at ground zero, trying to save as many as they could. Such a terrible day. We shall never forget it, Kelly. Love, Carolyn
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