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The Day America Stood Still

It just took one day
To grab our attention
There’s not much to say
But lots of reflection.

The airplanes they flew
Wreaking havoc on all
No one had a clue
That the towers would fall.

Such cowards with hate
They claimed so many lives
On that terrible date
Left husbands without wives.

So many were lost
Our sisters and brothers
Their lives were the cost
Plus fathers and mothers.

Many stood with awe
They were asking why
For what they just saw
Coming out of the sky.

Such terror and fear
And so quickly they hit
The end may be here
Should I run, stand or sit?

The heroes did save
As many as they could
For their lives they gave
Not knowing that they would.

People hung their flags
Keeping their families near
Many body bags
This horror wasn’t clear.

Honoring that morn
Our eyes begin to fill
The world was torn
America stood still.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 6, 2010 at 1:19 PM
Powerful poem. Nice use of rhyme to share your thoughts. Congratulations on your win in Dane Ann's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing! Karen
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July 6, 2010 at 7:46 AM
Wonderfully incisive write about a day we will always remember. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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July 6, 2010 at 6:43 AM
Congrats Kelly on your winning poem in the freedom and liberty contest.. with these wonderful thought provoking words.. enjoy.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation.. AlohA...
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July 6, 2010 at 4:18 AM
Congratulations Kelly on your win in Dane Ann's contest "Liberty and Freedom to Choose". Love, Carol
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September 21, 2009 at 1:47 PM
Tremendous poem and tribute, it's one of these days when you reflect and remember where you were>>James
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September 20, 2009 at 1:59 PM
Yes, the day the world stood still, would describe it very well. Very beautiful written, Kelly, thanks for sharing, Sincerely, Moses
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September 20, 2009 at 7:41 AM
"America stood still" -- I don't think the emotion of this day can be stated any more clearly than with these three words. We have to admire the "heroes" who worked at ground zero, trying to save as many as they could. Such a terrible day. We shall never forget it, Kelly. Love, Carolyn
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