The Day After In a Mall

When that jolly red man with a sack
brings your wishes to you off the rack,
no late Christmas night
for first frosty light,
warm the car up and take it all back.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 9:35 AM
ah ha! a grinch LOL..right some of us need money for health insurance (wince) Light & Love good win!
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 9:04 PM
way to go, Gerard, A great place in this fun contest! LUv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 11:16 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Christmas" contest Gerard. So happy to see your name high on the list.Love, Carol
Wilson Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 3:37 AM
Congratulations on your 3rd place win. God Bless. Leon
Kendrick Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 3:34 PM
Good one..That is what happens with much of the gifts...Congratulations on the win..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 4:35 AM
Congrats Gerard my friend on your big win in Francine's contest with this delightful entry luv.. bravo.. good one.. enjoy a top win with luv..are u ready for some football?
Devonshire Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 4:29 PM
Big congratulations to you, Gerard! Your poem rocks!! (So do you.) Love, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 3:57 PM
Gerard, wonderful joy, and congratulations on your third place. Agape, Moses
Richards Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 3:41 PM
This one made me laugh, Gerard!! Great work!! :) Congratulations!!
Roberts Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 2:39 PM
I work in retail and related to this one in a big way , congrats on your third place win in my contest Gerard, thank you for supporting it
Brown Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 10:41 AM
Amazing. Enjoyed reading your poetry today Gerard and thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol
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December 3, 2010 at 8:10 AM
Guess you've had some experience with this, eh, Gerard? Such a fun limerick! Hope you entered it in Francine's contest. Thanks for your kind comments, dear friend. Hope you don't have to make this return to the mall with unwanted gifts this year. LOL Love, Carolyn
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December 2, 2010 at 8:20 PM
hahaha. sounds like you have experience with this one! Luv, Andrea
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