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The Day After

His touch His kiss His hugs Don’t miss His silent His violent Egoist I hate His lies And betrayal Those tears Empty nights He left Heart was broken And then I was free To go And to try To do different things To search And to find And spread Broken wings To reach And to do So many new things

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/27/2013 4:30:00 PM
like a caged bird set free you soar in the joy of freedom....thank you for your kind words Ellie....best wishes
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 9/28/2013 9:41:00 AM
Yes Joseph, even the golden cage will not substitute for lack of freedom, thank you for taking the time and I appreciate you comment.......:)
Date: 9/5/2013 5:44:00 PM
VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 9/5/2013 9:03:00 PM
I very appreciate you taking the time to read my work... xoxo.... Ellie
Date: 8/30/2013 6:05:00 PM
Dominate the skies ...
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 9/5/2013 9:01:00 PM
Thank you Michael......
Date: 8/28/2013 9:44:00 PM
Wow....fly sister fly...love the energy of this poem:0) yes some birds are not meant to be caged and when , the chance is there a whole world that may not have been recognized before is open to the possiblity, of the day after:) Ty4sharing really enjoyed reading your wonderful poem today ellie...peaceful journey <3 cherie
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 8/29/2013 10:17:00 PM
Thanks Cherie, your comment means a lot to me. Ellie.....:)
Date: 8/28/2013 6:34:00 PM
Good for you! I hope you soar to heights beyond any you may have imagined. Nice to see another Canadian join up. Welcome to the soup. I am from Kelowna BC originally from Kirkland Lake Ontario.
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Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 8/28/2013 7:01:00 PM
I visit Kelowna every year in summer time, great city, love it. Thanks Richard ...:)

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