The Day After

His touch
His kiss
His hugs
Don’t miss

His silent
His violent
Egoist 
I hate

His lies
And betrayal 
Those tears
Empty nights

He left
Heart was broken
And then I was free

To go
And to try
To do different things

To search
And to find
And spread 
Broken wings

To reach
And to do
So many new things
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 4:30 PM
like a caged bird set free you soar in the joy of freedom....thank you for your kind words Ellie....best wishes
Jubenville Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 9:41 AM
Yes Joseph, even the golden cage will not substitute for lack of freedom, thank you for taking the time and I appreciate you comment.......:)
Mcdaid Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 5:44 PM
VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE
Jubenville Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 9:03 PM
I very appreciate you taking the time to read my work... xoxo.... Ellie
Michael Ikechukwu Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 6:05 PM
Dominate the skies ...
Jubenville Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 9:01 PM
Thank you Michael......
Thomas Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 9:44 PM
Wow....fly sister fly...love the energy of this poem:0) yes some birds are not meant to be caged and when , the chance is there a whole world that may not have been recognized before is open to the possiblity, of the day after:) Ty4sharing really enjoyed reading your wonderful poem today ellie...peaceful journey <3 cherie
Jubenville Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 10:17 PM
Thanks Cherie, your comment means a lot to me. Ellie.....:)
Lamoureux Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 6:34 PM
Good for you! I hope you soar to heights beyond any you may have imagined. Nice to see another Canadian join up. Welcome to the soup. I am from Kelowna BC originally from Kirkland Lake Ontario.
Jubenville Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 7:01 PM
I visit Kelowna every year in summer time, great city, love it. Thanks Richard ...:)
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