Akshay Rawat Poet Rhyme

The Day

Let's gather
together
And confess our sins
let's leave the pain
the curse.our offence.
The one and only
the mightiest, come solemnly.
I see him at once,
touched hi feet
only with my eyes
and then turn fleet
to recite the last sigh
with my that suspire
he looked at me thou
he was trying to impart
human were the reason for the moan
I requested him to give us a chance
he stated "it will only enhance
the suffering and the pain".
I closed my eyes with tears in mine
And stood erect to start
start the depart.

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Poet Destroyer A July 7, 2015 at 2:44 PM nice to see this on a winning list. LINDA

Skat A July 6, 2015 at 9:40 PM Akshay Rawat ,, :) Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest. Love **SKAT**

Angie Thomas May 15, 2015 at 3:41 AM congratulations on having your poem featured Akshay...and I have to say...Amazing work... drop by anytime :) Akshay Rawat May 15, 2015 at 4:39 AM Thank you Angie . sure will bond more.

Skat A May 10, 2015 at 10:29 AM Akshay :) Congratulations on having your poem featured this Mothers Day. SKAT love

Anne-Lise Andresen April 27, 2015 at 3:14 AM - Akshay, a touching but great poem from you - Welcome to P -Soup - I wish you a wonderful new week :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A April 26, 2015 at 5:41 PM Thank you for the sweet reply on my comment. LINDA

Skat A April 26, 2015 at 1:54 AM Akshay, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Akshay Rawat April 26, 2015 at 8:39 PM Sure , this is great the appreciation from you guys, it's just awesome.

Poet Destroyer A April 24, 2015 at 2:31 PM Akshay, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@ Akshay Rawat April 24, 2015 at 11:34 PM Thank you, hoping to explore more.