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Let's gather together And confess our sins let's leave the pain the curse.our offence. The one and only the mightiest, come solemnly. I see him at once, touched hi feet only with my eyes and then turn fleet to recite the last sigh with my that suspire he looked at me thou he was trying to impart human were the reason for the moan I requested him to give us a chance he stated "it will only enhance the suffering and the pain". I closed my eyes with tears in mine And stood erect to start start the depart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/7/2015 2:44:00 PM
nice to see this on a winning list. LINDA
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Date: 7/6/2015 9:40:00 PM
Akshay Rawat ,, :) Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 5/15/2015 3:41:00 AM
congratulations on having your poem featured Akshay...and I have to say...Amazing work... drop by anytime :)
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Akshay Rawat
Date: 5/15/2015 4:39:00 AM
Thank you Angie . sure will bond more.
Date: 5/10/2015 10:29:00 AM
Akshay :) Congratulations on having your poem featured this Mothers Day. SKAT love
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Date: 4/27/2015 3:14:00 AM
- Akshay, a touching but great poem from you - Welcome to P -Soup - I wish you a wonderful new week :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/26/2015 5:41:00 PM
Thank you for the sweet reply on my comment. LINDA
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Date: 4/26/2015 1:54:00 AM
Akshay, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Akshay Rawat
Date: 4/26/2015 8:39:00 PM
Sure , this is great the appreciation from you guys, it's just awesome.
Date: 4/24/2015 2:31:00 PM
Akshay, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Akshay Rawat
Date: 4/24/2015 11:34:00 PM
Thank you, hoping to explore more.

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