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The Day

When the moon goes down And the sun peeps up The night breeze welcomes When the cups are ready for tea And the kids are ready to play The sun sets for a rest And the evening passes west When the souls are to rest In the dark deep blue sky The stars lit the lanterns So it is night

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Date: 3/28/2025 4:24:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/22/2016 7:56:00 PM
KRIYA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 12/13/2014 3:46:00 AM
Nice!! I likethis alot
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