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The Day

We're going out today Me and all my friends. I waited all day To meet all of my other friends. We are heading towards the mall To see all of the clothes. I can buy for them all Even flip-flops that shows off our toes. Then at the end of the day We grab our bags and go. We can do it again some other day But next time we'll take it slow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/12/2009 4:29:00 PM
Dear Elizabeth, Being with Friend always brings joy Great Write LOVEYOUr Talent...HG
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Date: 2/11/2009 4:32:00 PM
Keep up the good work...Raul
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