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My snarling flash drive numbed my approach as I drove fifty clicks into the morning, still dark. I did obeisance to my tyrannical inbox, it showed no mercy to either side of the screen. Everyone had an axe to grind, not least of all me, but the futureless kid at the traffic lights would probably have settled for a pie. I shovelled some cholesterol into the gash in my face and chased it down with coffee, strong as the strongman from the travelling circus, I can't drink it any other way. Much grinding of axes continued, some of it by me, but the forgotten old man at the traffic lights may have settled for a pie. My inbox, by late afternoon, was plainly laughing at me, and obeisance continued on both sides of the screen. As I drove fifty clicks into the evening, now dark, my snarling flash drive hypnotised my retreat. 1st August 2018

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Date: 8/3/2018 9:09:00 AM
Yes we are prisoners of a sort. Well expressed.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 8/3/2018 10:14:00 AM
Thanks Richard, glad you enjoyed. Prisoners indeed.
Date: 8/2/2018 11:02:00 AM
The no fun side of tech and e-mail control of our time etc.. So well written and a unique poem.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 8/3/2018 12:04:00 AM
Thanks Warren, I'm glad you enjoyed. And you're right, the tech is mean as mean.
Date: 8/1/2018 5:00:00 AM
And here I'm on the other side. I barely get any messages in my email, angry or otherwise lol Anyway, I love the use of metaphors in this
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Date: 8/1/2018 9:37:00 AM
Thanks, Safi, counterpart on the other side of the screen. I'm always pleased to know that a write is appreciated. I look forward to reading more from you too ?

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