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Flowers on the sill | Fiori di lilla, Fotografia di fiori, Fiori

Outside my window a little sparrow sings, a composer on violin strings; and far off a baby cries, a loud dog replies. The song drifts, sighs; oh, such gifts ! A hummingbird flies, with wild wings going clock wise; job done, he leaves on fluttery wings, outside my window a little sparrow sings. ___________________________ July 12, 2020 Poetry/Andaree/Rhyme/The Dawn Sighs Copyright Protected, ID 20-1267-725-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Andaree - 11 lines sponsor, Joseph May Second Place

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Date: 7/27/2020 3:33:00 AM
Your muse flows like pages from a fairytale. All immersed in their own music yet blended to be one beautiful song. Congratulations on your win Constance. Much love :) This is a fave for me :)
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Date: 7/30/2020 2:18:00 PM
Aditi, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations and the FAV, this poem is one of my favs too _Constance
Date: 7/19/2020 3:39:00 PM
Constance, back with my congrats on this most adorable Andaree. I wanted to ask, Was it your first one??
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Date: 7/19/2020 3:42:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the compliment and the congrats, I think I wrote one before for a contest, but I like this one a lot _Constance
Date: 7/19/2020 12:36:00 PM
Your lovely poem connects us with the beauty of nature Constance. Congratulations on your wonderful second place win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/19/2020 3:43:00 PM
Connie, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 7/19/2020 6:58:00 AM
Your words paint as lovely a picture as any painting, Constance. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/19/2020 3:44:00 PM
Jenna, thanks for the nice comment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 7/19/2020 6:46:00 AM
Congrats!! on the win Constance...great entry my friend...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 7/19/2020 3:44:00 PM
WW, thanks so much for the congrats and the compliment _Constance
Date: 7/18/2020 4:51:00 PM
Absolutely charming Constance, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/19/2020 3:45:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 7/18/2020 12:45:00 PM
The lovely musical notes of dawn, Lovely write Constance..Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/19/2020 3:45:00 PM
Joseph, thanks for the inspiration and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 7/13/2020 3:08:00 AM
I love this melodic Andaree, Constance:)
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Date: 7/16/2020 3:57:00 AM
Jo, thanks for the compliment _Constance
Date: 7/12/2020 9:12:00 PM
Nature daily echoes of the day composed in perfectness. Good luck in the contest my friend.Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/16/2020 3:58:00 AM
Eve, thanks for the nice comment _Constance
Date: 7/12/2020 3:42:00 PM
I think I have rarely seen my form so well executed, Constance. a FAVE
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Date: 7/12/2020 8:52:00 PM
Andrea, well that is the ultimate compliment, wow, you have made me very happy and thanks for the FAV too _Constance ps...it is a beautiful form
Date: 7/12/2020 2:44:00 PM
Well said! Good luck! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 7/12/2020 8:52:00 PM
Rico, thanks for visiting and the compliment _Constance
Date: 7/12/2020 6:22:00 AM
Wonderful imagery, Constance--in sights and sounds of birds.
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Date: 7/12/2020 11:35:00 AM
Vijay, thank you for the compliment on my poem, I hope Joseph likes it _Constance
Date: 7/12/2020 1:57:00 AM
Gorgeous and brilliant, and best of all, I now understand what an Andaree is.
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Date: 7/12/2020 11:36:00 AM
Caren, thanks for the compliment on my poem, happy to inspire, perhaps, now you will join the contest _Constance
Date: 7/12/2020 1:22:00 AM
Visually wondrous, Constance, a lovely write indeed, --my best to you! -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William
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Date: 7/12/2020 11:36:00 AM
William, thanks so much for the compliment on my poem, appreciate _Constance
Date: 7/11/2020 11:55:00 PM
Wonderful creativity Constance.. Good luck in the contest..
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Date: 7/12/2020 12:13:00 AM
Jenish, thanks so much for the compliment and visit _Constance