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The Dawn Sighs

 
Outside my window a little sparrow sings,
a composer on violin strings;
and far off a baby cries,
a loud dog replies.
The song drifts,
sighs;
oh, such gifts !
A hummingbird flies,
with wild wings going clock wise;
job done, he leaves on fluttery wings, 
outside my window a little sparrow sings.

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July 12, 2020


Poetry/Andaree/Rhyme/The Dawn Sighs
Copyright Protected, ID 20-1267-725-03
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France


Written for the contest, Andaree - 11 lines
sponsor, Joseph May

Second Place

Copyright © Constance La France | Year Posted 2020

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Aditi Mishra Date: 7/27/2020 3:33:00 AM Your muse flows like pages from a fairytale. All immersed in their own music yet blended to be one beautiful song. Congratulations on your win Constance. Much love :) This is a fave for me :) Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/30/2020 2:18:00 PM Aditi, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations and the FAV, this poem is one of my favs too _Constance

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/19/2020 3:39:00 PM Constance, back with my congrats on this most adorable Andaree. I wanted to ask, Was it your first one?? Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/19/2020 3:42:00 PM Andrea, thanks for the compliment and the congrats, I think I wrote one before for a contest, but I like this one a lot _Constance

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 7/19/2020 12:36:00 PM Your lovely poem connects us with the beauty of nature Constance. Congratulations on your wonderful second place win! Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/19/2020 3:43:00 PM Connie, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance

Jenna Logan Date: 7/19/2020 6:58:00 AM Your words paint as lovely a picture as any painting, Constance. Congratulations. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/19/2020 3:44:00 PM Jenna, thanks for the nice comment and the congratulations _Constance

Winged Warrior Date: 7/19/2020 6:46:00 AM Congrats!! on the win Constance...great entry my friend...love & hugs...^WW^ :o) Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/19/2020 3:44:00 PM WW, thanks so much for the congrats and the compliment _Constance

Jan Allison Date: 7/18/2020 4:51:00 PM Absolutely charming Constance, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/19/2020 3:45:00 PM Jan, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance

Joseph May Date: 7/18/2020 12:45:00 PM The lovely musical notes of dawn, Lovely write Constance..Congrats on your win Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/19/2020 3:45:00 PM Joseph, thanks for the inspiration and the congratulations _Constance

Joanna Daniel Date: 7/13/2020 3:08:00 AM I love this melodic Andaree, Constance:) Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/16/2020 3:57:00 AM Jo, thanks for the compliment _Constance

Eve Roper Date: 7/12/2020 9:12:00 PM Nature daily echoes of the day composed in perfectness. Good luck in the contest my friend.Hugs Eve Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/16/2020 3:58:00 AM Eve, thanks for the nice comment _Constance

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/12/2020 3:42:00 PM I think I have rarely seen my form so well executed, Constance. a FAVE Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/12/2020 8:52:00 PM Andrea, well that is the ultimate compliment, wow, you have made me very happy and thanks for the FAV too _Constance ps...it is a beautiful form

Rico Leffanta Date: 7/12/2020 2:44:00 PM Well said! Good luck! Aloha! Rico Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/12/2020 8:52:00 PM Rico, thanks for visiting and the compliment _Constance

Vijay Pandit Date: 7/12/2020 6:22:00 AM Wonderful imagery, Constance--in sights and sounds of birds. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/12/2020 11:35:00 AM Vijay, thank you for the compliment on my poem, I hope Joseph likes it _Constance

Caren Krutsinger Date: 7/12/2020 1:57:00 AM Gorgeous and brilliant, and best of all, I now understand what an Andaree is. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/12/2020 11:36:00 AM Caren, thanks for the compliment on my poem, happy to inspire, perhaps, now you will join the contest _Constance

Hilo Poet Date: 7/12/2020 1:22:00 AM Visually wondrous, Constance, a lovely write indeed, --my best to you! -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/12/2020 11:36:00 AM William, thanks so much for the compliment on my poem, appreciate _Constance

Jenish Somadas Date: 7/11/2020 11:55:00 PM Wonderful creativity Constance.. Good luck in the contest.. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/12/2020 12:13:00 AM Jenish, thanks so much for the compliment and visit _Constance