Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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The Dawn Sighs

 
Outside my window a little sparrow sings,
a composer on violin strings;
and far off a baby cries,
a loud dog replies.
The song drifts,
sighs;
oh, such gifts !
A hummingbird flies,
with wild wings going clock wise;
job done, he leaves on fluttery wings, 
outside my window a little sparrow sings.

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July 12, 2020


Poetry/Andaree/Rhyme/The Dawn Sighs
Copyright Protected, ID 20-1267-725-03
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France


Written for the contest, Andaree - 11 lines
sponsor, Joseph May

Second Place

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Aditi Mishra July 27, 2020 at 3:33 AM Your muse flows like pages from a fairytale. All immersed in their own music yet blended to be one beautiful song. Congratulations on your win Constance. Much love :) This is a fave for me :) Constance La France July 30, 2020 at 2:18 PM Aditi, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations and the FAV, this poem is one of my favs too _Constance

Andrea Dietrich July 19, 2020 at 3:39 PM Constance, back with my congrats on this most adorable Andaree. I wanted to ask, Was it your first one?? Constance La France July 19, 2020 at 3:42 PM Andrea, thanks for the compliment and the congrats, I think I wrote one before for a contest, but I like this one a lot _Constance

Connie Marcum Wong July 19, 2020 at 12:36 PM Your lovely poem connects us with the beauty of nature Constance. Congratulations on your wonderful second place win! Blessings xxoo Constance La France July 19, 2020 at 3:43 PM Connie, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance

Jenna Logan July 19, 2020 at 6:58 AM Your words paint as lovely a picture as any painting, Constance. Congratulations. Constance La France July 19, 2020 at 3:44 PM Jenna, thanks for the nice comment and the congratulations _Constance

Winged Warrior July 19, 2020 at 6:46 AM Congrats!! on the win Constance...great entry my friend...love & hugs...^WW^ :o) Constance La France July 19, 2020 at 3:44 PM WW, thanks so much for the congrats and the compliment _Constance

Jan Allison July 18, 2020 at 4:51 PM Absolutely charming Constance, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx Constance La France July 19, 2020 at 3:45 PM Jan, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance

Joseph May July 18, 2020 at 12:45 PM The lovely musical notes of dawn, Lovely write Constance..Congrats on your win Constance La France July 19, 2020 at 3:45 PM Joseph, thanks for the inspiration and the congratulations _Constance

Joanna Daniel July 13, 2020 at 3:08 AM I love this melodic Andaree, Constance:) Constance La France July 16, 2020 at 3:57 AM Jo, thanks for the compliment _Constance

Eve Roper July 12, 2020 at 9:12 PM Nature daily echoes of the day composed in perfectness. Good luck in the contest my friend.Hugs Eve Constance La France July 16, 2020 at 3:58 AM Eve, thanks for the nice comment _Constance

Andrea Dietrich July 12, 2020 at 3:42 PM I think I have rarely seen my form so well executed, Constance. a FAVE Constance La France July 12, 2020 at 8:52 PM Andrea, well that is the ultimate compliment, wow, you have made me very happy and thanks for the FAV too _Constance ps...it is a beautiful form

Rico Leffanta July 12, 2020 at 2:44 PM Well said! Good luck! Aloha! Rico Constance La France July 12, 2020 at 8:52 PM Rico, thanks for visiting and the compliment _Constance

Vijay Pandit July 12, 2020 at 6:22 AM Wonderful imagery, Constance--in sights and sounds of birds. Constance La France July 12, 2020 at 11:35 AM Vijay, thank you for the compliment on my poem, I hope Joseph likes it _Constance

Caren Krutsinger July 12, 2020 at 1:57 AM Gorgeous and brilliant, and best of all, I now understand what an Andaree is. Constance La France July 12, 2020 at 11:36 AM Caren, thanks for the compliment on my poem, happy to inspire, perhaps, now you will join the contest _Constance

Jenish Somadas July 11, 2020 at 11:55 PM Wonderful creativity Constance.. Good luck in the contest.. Constance La France July 12, 2020 at 12:13 AM Jenish, thanks so much for the compliment and visit _Constance